Recent Comments

2/29/24, 7:25 AM
Very hot, more so because everything about this seems like it could really happen. So looking forward to seeing what else might happen! (hopefully soon!) Having Steve find the windowless playroom off the garage, and fatefully manage to get a signed agreement for multiple very flexible visits over months is extreme arousing!
2/29/24, 5:38 AM
:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Day
2/29/24, 5:37 AM
Absolutely love this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
2/8/24, 6:31 AM
Great idea. Maybe think about asking an editor for help next time.

2/9/24, 11:53 PM
@[PJ34](/user/show/2558338) Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it.

Anonymous
2/29/24, 5:18 AM
@[TUMBRELLA08](/user/show/10046127) Just some very minor edits I saw but on the whole this is very well done! Please continue!
2/29/24, 3:57 AM
Really great second chapter. I really am loving the story and a way that I didn’t expect and I am really appreciate a really well done race change transformation, written out.
Anonymous
2/29/24, 3:10 AM
Very hot, loved how confused and unaware of the changes he was!
Anonymous
2/29/24, 2:24 AM
great story! love coming back to reread it.
Anonymous
2/29/24, 2:03 AM
I wish there would have been a bit more of a description of him attempting to resist the brainwashing, and his thoughts as it was all happening, rather than a before/after. Otherwise, great job!