Recent Comments

2/29/24, 5:38 AM
:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Day
2/29/24, 5:37 AM
Absolutely love this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
2/8/24, 6:31 AM
Great idea. Maybe think about asking an editor for help next time.

2/9/24, 11:53 PM
@[PJ34](/user/show/2558338) Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it.

Anonymous
2/29/24, 5:18 AM
@[TUMBRELLA08](/user/show/10046127) Just some very minor edits I saw but on the whole this is very well done! Please continue!
2/29/24, 3:57 AM
Really great second chapter. I really am loving the story and a way that I didn’t expect and I am really appreciate a really well done race change transformation, written out.
Anonymous
2/29/24, 3:10 AM
Very hot, loved how confused and unaware of the changes he was!
Anonymous
2/29/24, 2:24 AM
great story! love coming back to reread it.
Anonymous
2/29/24, 2:03 AM
I wish there would have been a bit more of a description of him attempting to resist the brainwashing, and his thoughts as it was all happening, rather than a before/after. Otherwise, great job!
2/28/24, 10:47 PM
Great story! Wish we'd been there the moment he broke.