Recent Comments

6/5/25, 10:00 PM
I hope Colby can save Maximus, and I hope they can be together. I look forward to read more.

6/5/25, 11:17 PM
@Jonanator I'm not one to not give the HEA, but I won't make it easy to get there.

6/6/25, 2:12 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) What does HEA mean? Well, I look forward to reading then

6/6/25, 2:30 AM
@Jonanator They get a "Happy Ever After" aka I don't destroy them in the end, but it might take more than one actual story. It all depends how this goes.

6/6/25, 3:16 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) Ah, ok. Sounds good. Well, I look forward to see more then. Your one of my favorite authors.

6/6/25, 1:49 PM
@Jonanator Thanks. I appreciate it. This was personal and I’m not sure it is being enjoyed. I appreciate you letting you know.
6/6/25, 7:30 AM
Absolutely - this is turning into a great story.

6/6/25, 1:03 PM
@[Yorksbiker08](/user/show/1049586) Thanks! I'm glad you like it.
6/6/25, 6:13 AM
NEED NEXT CHAPTER NOW

6/6/25, 1:02 PM
@[iBrnx](/user/show/10052490) As of me typing this, a further four chapters are in queue waiting for approval. Keep your eyes peeled!
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6/6/25, 1:58 AM
Please, continue! So hot

6/6/25, 1:02 PM
@Anonymous Chapter 2 is now posted and a further four are now in queue waiting for approval.
6/6/25, 12:50 PM
please write more
6/6/25, 12:03 PM
This story is sooo hot, that i miss really chapter 3. I hope you will decide to continue writing
6/6/25, 11:13 AM
Hot story. I'm very interested in the next movie and his effects.
6/6/25, 9:31 AM
This is a very hot story, please continue it.
6/3/25, 4:17 AM
WOOOWWW!!! Thanks for continuing the story! I'm hooked to it, ha ha ha! There wasn't much "action," and yet I still found it very erotic, with the description and the changes in the universe. Thanks for that! I like that you introduce the changes little by little; it will make the story much more exciting! You have a fan, dude!

6/5/25, 11:21 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) I updated it a bit.

6/6/25, 6:22 AM
@[Slothyslothysloth](/user/show/1253105) Thank you so much! It's a shame I can't give it a five out of five in every category again. I'd be happy to do it, I love the update. Extremely sexy, very hot battle, and good humiliation. I like that Meatier's uniform is so small he can't even stay inside it, he's starting to became into a himbo. And I like Nico; he's a cute character. A great addition to the story!
6/6/25, 6:02 AM
10/10, what a dream it would be to be in Josh's shoes. I mean, preferably without the kidnapping :P