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Anonymous
2/15/24, 8:05 PM
Removed my name just to be extra sure I’m not unintentionally revealing myself too early. Thanks for the amazing response! The next chapter has been broken down plot-wise and writing begins this evening! Hopefully a chapter 2 to come next week. I’d like to try to get at least 3-4 chapters out by the end of the contest with 5 chapters total and a small epilogue.

Anonymous
2/15/24, 8:39 PM
@The Story's Author (hidden) I think I already know who you are; as I'm familiar with your style and prose, but I do hope you don't leave us hanging!

Anonymous
2/17/24, 12:05 AM
@The Story's Author (hidden) Best news yet

Anonymous
2/20/24, 1:56 AM
@The Story's Author (hidden) More soon?

2/25/24, 11:58 PM
@The Story's Author (hidden) Are you close on a second chapter? Need some twincest

2/26/24, 1:31 AM
@AnonDog Just posted chapter two! Will just need to wait for approval <3
Sam
2/26/24, 1:13 AM
I’m loving this slow burn!!
will we get part 2?
2/25/24, 11:36 PM
2???
2/25/24, 10:52 PM
I love this series. The vignettes you tell as the fog drifts across the town are all so exciting and different. I can't wait until the next instalment
2/25/24, 8:14 PM
Amen Currious! He’s turned us into total sluts for the next chapter. My name is John Roger’s and I’m a slut for Jack Parker’s stories.
2/25/24, 8:03 PM
As someone who deeply enjoys demon transformations and rarely gets to read it… thank you 😈
2/25/24, 7:14 PM
Oh, this is _really_ fun. And it does a fantastic job with playing on the ideas of the previous chapters and taking them to a new level—very nice! The characterization of the salesmen is also a great touch, and the ending sequence with the technician was inspired. I'm a fan!

2/25/24, 7:31 PM
@[Nu and the Nus](/user/show/25270) Thank you! That’s really appreciated coming from you (as I immensely enjoy your stories 😁)!
2/25/24, 7:14 PM
Obviously the transformations and muscle growth are really hot, but my favorite part is at the end, where after the whole orgy, he walks out and helps an old lady with her groceries. Its a really nice touch. Shows that even though he's been changed so much, he's still a kind person who just wants to help. Even the transformations are motivated by him thinking he's helping these men. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
2/25/24, 5:40 PM
Things are getting hotter and better. I like that now je could make them more submissive and effeminate. So he could give and take muscles. I like it. Cant wait to see whats next.