Recent Comments

2/24/24, 8:05 AM
I'm relieved this isn't the actual conclusion. It's simply dreadful. The narrative lacks direction in this rendition. It's truly abysmal. I'm uncertain why the cyclical and repetitive pattern of repeated failures isn't apparent to you. While it might have been understandable initially, after countless failures, it loses its appeal entirely.

2/25/24, 10:43 AM
@[musclejunky](/user/show/10019676) Thank you for your passionate response. I'm afraid I think we just have different tastes.
2/24/24, 10:43 PM
I'm a big fan of these "what if" endings, and this is no different! Excited to see where the real conclusion comes out!

2/25/24, 10:40 AM
@[rodjock](/user/show/227582) Thanks for saying so! I enjoy exploring these and throwing in things that just can't happen in the main story. Shouldn't be too long before the concluding chapters start rolling out. I hope you enjoy the final split when it comes!
TW
2/24/24, 11:39 PM
Took a small break from reading (in general), but wanted to let you just how fast I felt motivated to read again when I saw there was another bad en-- I mean "what if" ending. It's been fun to see the roles they've been reduced to in each ending - this one no different. It's also nice to see how Prufussr and the OG Tri-hard's motivations differ - though, personally, this just makes Tri-hard all the more hotter. Thank you for writing and excited at the penultimate bad-end that is to come!!

2/25/24, 10:35 AM
@TW Thank you, and welcome back :D Yes, these endings aren't really about our heroes at all (don't tell them that!). They're more of a way to look at each of the villains who are about to drop out of the race and what they'd do if they actually 'won'. OG **Tri-Hard** was set on his retirement plan and Charles let his sadistic tendencies win out over his claims of serving the 'greater good'. I'd have loved to have gone into greater detail with his comeuppance and the boys' fall into Hank's hands in this ending, but I'd just be stepping on the toes of the next ending there. Hope you enjoy the coming chapter and the lead in to the final showdown!
2/25/24, 9:11 AM
Awesome. Amazing. Perfect. This is amazing, i love the concept. I really jist cannot get over how great this was. Spectacular work!
2/25/24, 7:20 AM
@prettyrickifag@yahoo.com I would choose to be Mateo.
2/25/24, 6:37 AM
Keeps getting better and better. So who's next? Former Spidermen like Andrew and Toby? Bigger hunkier guys like his castmates the Chrises? Or maybe going into DC-land to get Henry or Ben or Jason? So many options... :wink:
Anonymous
2/25/24, 5:53 AM
Great start can’t wait for the next installment
StrongDom
2/25/24, 12:12 AM
Jesus Christ! Man, this is insane! Well written, hot as hell, amazing set up, faggot got his dues. Fuck, this could make you question some things about your place in the world. Better with every read. Thanks man!

2/25/24, 12:58 AM
@StrongDom Thanks man. Glad you enjoyed...maybe hit me up if you need to talk something through. -JT
2/24/24, 11:06 PM
What's that bible verse? Oh yeah - "and a child shall lead them."
puppy drone
2/24/24, 10:40 PM
woof