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2/25/24, 7:14 PM
Obviously the transformations and muscle growth are really hot, but my favorite part is at the end, where after the whole orgy, he walks out and helps an old lady with her groceries. Its a really nice touch. Shows that even though he's been changed so much, he's still a kind person who just wants to help. Even the transformations are motivated by him thinking he's helping these men. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
2/25/24, 5:40 PM
Things are getting hotter and better. I like that now je could make them more submissive and effeminate. So he could give and take muscles. I like it. Cant wait to see whats next.
2/18/24, 6:34 AM
That was really hot. Although I hoped to see Jax inked.

2/25/24, 5:34 PM
@[Tom Rubber](/user/show/923197) I hope you like part 2. I like to reward those who comment on my stories ;)
2/25/24, 4:20 PM
Great start to this story. Can't wait to see the father fall and get turned into a puppet.
2/25/24, 2:45 PM
Another amazing installment. Another step into be totally enthralled by the Parker Fsmily Universe and the mind of its Creator. You kind of turn your readers into sluts for your mind and yeah it's a great experience. Thank you.
2/25/24, 2:10 AM
Love the variety of body types and attitudes. Can't help but wonder if there isn't going to be a mix-up in protocols: imagine Greg and Smokey getting shots designed for the other. Seems like studly Dr Troy has been getting a little careless lately...

2/25/24, 11:25 AM
@[laocoon](/user/show/10002109) Tho not my plan, that would be fun! I have a scene in my head for Greg — I hope I get to do it — involving the pond…
2/24/24, 8:05 AM
I'm relieved this isn't the actual conclusion. It's simply dreadful. The narrative lacks direction in this rendition. It's truly abysmal. I'm uncertain why the cyclical and repetitive pattern of repeated failures isn't apparent to you. While it might have been understandable initially, after countless failures, it loses its appeal entirely.

2/25/24, 10:43 AM
@[musclejunky](/user/show/10019676) Thank you for your passionate response. I'm afraid I think we just have different tastes.
2/24/24, 10:43 PM
I'm a big fan of these "what if" endings, and this is no different! Excited to see where the real conclusion comes out!

2/25/24, 10:40 AM
@[rodjock](/user/show/227582) Thanks for saying so! I enjoy exploring these and throwing in things that just can't happen in the main story. Shouldn't be too long before the concluding chapters start rolling out. I hope you enjoy the final split when it comes!
TW
2/24/24, 11:39 PM
Took a small break from reading (in general), but wanted to let you just how fast I felt motivated to read again when I saw there was another bad en-- I mean "what if" ending. It's been fun to see the roles they've been reduced to in each ending - this one no different. It's also nice to see how Prufussr and the OG Tri-hard's motivations differ - though, personally, this just makes Tri-hard all the more hotter. Thank you for writing and excited at the penultimate bad-end that is to come!!

2/25/24, 10:35 AM
@TW Thank you, and welcome back :D Yes, these endings aren't really about our heroes at all (don't tell them that!). They're more of a way to look at each of the villains who are about to drop out of the race and what they'd do if they actually 'won'. OG **Tri-Hard** was set on his retirement plan and Charles let his sadistic tendencies win out over his claims of serving the 'greater good'. I'd have loved to have gone into greater detail with his comeuppance and the boys' fall into Hank's hands in this ending, but I'd just be stepping on the toes of the next ending there. Hope you enjoy the coming chapter and the lead in to the final showdown!
2/25/24, 9:11 AM
Awesome. Amazing. Perfect. This is amazing, i love the concept. I really jist cannot get over how great this was. Spectacular work!