Recent Comments

9/13/25, 9:01 PM
Glad you’ve picked up this story again, I absolutely loved chapter 3! Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
9/13/25, 8:54 PM
Loved this Chapter...Daddy Lane and Danny were sinful. Ready to see Coach join in!
Drifting Scot
9/12/25, 12:52 PM
Brilliant idea, beautifully executed by a Master of the craft...pardon the pun!

9/13/25, 8:39 PM
@Drifting Scot You always say such kind things. Better get on with the next chapter!
9/13/25, 6:10 PM
"I lice to obey" ... need to read next chapter.. This slow conversion are arrousal.
9/13/25, 5:38 PM
Awesome! Fantastic writing! Qa'pla!
9/11/25, 11:12 AM
What an unexpected surprise. Cool!

9/13/25, 4:39 PM
@[Earthshaker](/user/show/10001552) Why thank you Mr Earthshaker
9/13/25, 3:48 PM
Loving this. Any plans to continue?
9/13/25, 2:59 PM
Yay! There's finally a daddy! This was extremely hot and also really funny. I can imagine Kyle's confusion standing there seeing his dildos fucking someone else. I'm kinda bummed out that he intervened and had "cut" the symbiosis that was being created between the team and Danny. It would be interesting to see what would happen if the relationship and the messages define something equal. However it was worth it to get Daddy Lane and Danny boy. We will definitely need more of these two. I also wonder how coach will react given that he's not under the spell of Oby. Can't wait for next week!
9/13/25, 11:08 AM
Not many mind-control in the first chapter, BUT it's a great starting! Looking forward to the next chapter. btw, I'm so into military green singlets, that's a bonus!

9/13/25, 1:51 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) Yeh it will be clearer later on. No worries