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2/24/24, 6:00 PM
Nice Work. Looking forward for the next chapter
Anonymous
2/24/24, 7:31 AM
Loved this but hoped there would be more.

LeoG
2/24/24, 10:04 AM
@Anonymous I wanted to do more, but it sort of felt like... that was it, if that makes sense. I'm brainstorming another story that will have hopefully more to it.
2/24/24, 2:53 AM
For once, this is a bad ending I am glad is only a what-if. Not because of writing, but the cavemen troupe and having the professor win are not how this story should end. If there is the good, the bad, and the ugly; then this is the 'ugly' ending. I'm still hoping that one or both the boys gets dressed in rubber. But this chapter does open a curious dilemma for the boys; and how it will affect things moving forward. Just how deep is their link? Nick transformed 'remotely' because of his link with Henry. Could this be done in the reverse as well? And if these interaction carries over into the actual storyline than how on earth can these boys hope to win? If anything happens to one of them, the other is just as doomed. They are literally each others Achilles Hell. Ex: as much as Hank wants to personally turn Nick into a rubber pup (which sounds really hot) than wouldn't Henry succumb as well.

2/24/24, 6:56 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Yeah, I didn't expect this mini-chapter was going to appeal to you. Thanks for sticking with it though! In exchange, I think I can promise that remaining bad-end should be the one you've been waiting for! Oh, and I wouldn't worry _too_ much about that whole 'connection' thingy! _I'm sure it will never come up again,..._ :shushing_face:
2/24/24, 6:49 AM
Yes yes YES!! Excellent writing, hot scenes, meaningful dialog, and the twist of his father's behind-the-scenes activities all make this so freaking good!
2/24/24, 5:43 AM
Definitely hot! I like this branch better than the other one. 😛
Oct 14, 2005
2/24/24, 4:44 AM
I hope that there is another chapter coming, I wanna see the changes.
2/24/24, 1:05 AM
I'm intrigued by the thought of a "shared apartment" with the potency of this now empty suit hanging in the bathroom.
Anonymous
2/24/24, 12:54 AM
Hello sir may we please cum more to a sequel?