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Anonymous
2/24/24, 7:31 AM
Loved this but hoped there would be more.

LeoG
2/24/24, 10:04 AM
@Anonymous I wanted to do more, but it sort of felt like... that was it, if that makes sense. I'm brainstorming another story that will have hopefully more to it.
2/24/24, 2:53 AM
For once, this is a bad ending I am glad is only a what-if. Not because of writing, but the cavemen troupe and having the professor win are not how this story should end. If there is the good, the bad, and the ugly; then this is the 'ugly' ending. I'm still hoping that one or both the boys gets dressed in rubber. But this chapter does open a curious dilemma for the boys; and how it will affect things moving forward. Just how deep is their link? Nick transformed 'remotely' because of his link with Henry. Could this be done in the reverse as well? And if these interaction carries over into the actual storyline than how on earth can these boys hope to win? If anything happens to one of them, the other is just as doomed. They are literally each others Achilles Hell. Ex: as much as Hank wants to personally turn Nick into a rubber pup (which sounds really hot) than wouldn't Henry succumb as well.

2/24/24, 6:56 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Yeah, I didn't expect this mini-chapter was going to appeal to you. Thanks for sticking with it though! In exchange, I think I can promise that remaining bad-end should be the one you've been waiting for! Oh, and I wouldn't worry _too_ much about that whole 'connection' thingy! _I'm sure it will never come up again,..._ :shushing_face:
2/24/24, 6:49 AM
Yes yes YES!! Excellent writing, hot scenes, meaningful dialog, and the twist of his father's behind-the-scenes activities all make this so freaking good!
2/24/24, 5:43 AM
Definitely hot! I like this branch better than the other one. 😛
Oct 14, 2005
2/24/24, 4:44 AM
I hope that there is another chapter coming, I wanna see the changes.
2/24/24, 1:05 AM
I'm intrigued by the thought of a "shared apartment" with the potency of this now empty suit hanging in the bathroom.
Anonymous
2/24/24, 12:54 AM
Hello sir may we please cum more to a sequel?
2/23/24, 12:51 PM
> Christian may turn and run. Right into a wall of muscle and cock that is Big Budd. And then Big Budd may turn and run -- right into the hypermasculine giant that is Little Budd...

2/23/24, 2:34 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) The last time you wrote a story about Garden City, KS there was a train. No reason they can't create one of their own. The part where Jackson wakes up and Little Budd is dream fucking him. So fucking hot. Makes me think of a dog dreaming he's chasing a rabbit. To fall asleep with your big cock up a tight ass and it stays hard the entire time. Will the rise of Little Budd be the fall of the entire operation? Looking forward the the sticky situations you paint for us.

2/23/24, 10:32 PM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) This should illustrate just what kind of a nerd I am. When writing POLLINATION, I remember finding train routes online that went through Kansas and doing a "Happy Joy Joy" dance when I saw the line went through Garden City. Serendipitous, no? I wrote most of IMPLANT with the Google Maps of Palm Springs open in a tab -- I mapped all the bike routes I sent my characters on -- did road views at all the spots they stopped. I can even show you the exact spot where Eddie has his accident -- I'm THAT guy.

2/24/24, 12:40 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) I looked up Garden City, KS on the map too and saw the train line and the other towns. 10 years ago I worked on a project in Garden City, TX. Sadly no massive bodybuilders and it was in the West Texas desert so no cock shaped flowers. Your attention to detail is noticed.
prettyrickifag@yahoo.com
2/23/24, 9:01 PM
It would be so hot to be Benicio with a hot, virile, masculine man like Mateo!

2/23/24, 11:57 PM
@prettyrickifag@yahoo.com Mateo is my type of man too