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2/23/24, 11:04 AM
> “Don’t be nervous,” Dr. Troy said as he grabbed Rodney’s balls firmly – he could feel the cool muzzle of the gun press against his skin. “You’re starting out in a good place. These are nice balls, kid – they’re gonna be spectacular! Hell, yours will be transformative!”> We got some foreshadowing. Sounds like Rodney will be pressing his transformative gun against prostates instead of balls. Don't know if our beloved author can let Christian resist too much. If he freaks out too much then he would flee. Beating off is one thing. After the next dose when the others start fucking we'll probably see him panic. Christian may turn and run. Right into a wall of muscle and cock that is Big Budd. Fingers crossed or in this case swords.
Toysruskid
2/21/24, 2:13 PM
This story actually sucks! And not in a good way! Creative writer I see, please PLEASE try again! You can do better! Please take this as positive constructive criticism. I appreciated this read though. I look forward to your next writing or stories! 🙂✌️

Martin
2/23/24, 5:52 AM
@Toysruskid This comment is really mean, don't you think? There are many inexperienced writers here trying their best to please and arouse other people - and themselves. Your criticism might be warranted (I haven't read the story myself), but even if it is, you have to word it more carefully, always keep in mind that there's a person on the other side which might be deeply hurt by your comments and could be discouraged to ever write again.
2/23/24, 4:13 AM
HT, more please. Next chapter?
2/22/24, 2:27 AM
Oh, that poor tight end! It was a mistake to pass him up. I would have just kept sliding my finger between his rubber mounds; getting him to moan. And just keep ramping up the volume to make him submit. Make sure he follows orders and obeys. He already had training, team coordination, taking the offensive. Travis let his power trip get to him. Though I was saddened a bit to see that all the slaves are begin taken out of their rubber for that new suit. It makes sense, but still. Which brings up a major question I had before this chapter dropped. What is Hank's objective? Or his aim/end goal? It seems he is just being a 'better' Tri-Hard. But if that is the case, for what though? The first Tri-Hard was just setting up for his retirement after humiliating his hero rivals. But Hank isn't like that. I guess it is just more of the mystery.

2/22/24, 6:50 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Hank's driving purpose is to _be_ **Tri-Hard** now, since that's his only way to beat the brainwashing he'd been subjected to. Still, he's going to do things _his_ way and use his new position as a platform like he used his old shop; finding men who need to be put in their place. Those guys, like the few that passed his screening process, are going to get the non-combat drone treatment and remain as useless, but pretty ornaments and fucktoys.

2/22/24, 2:51 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Now that you say that it does ring bells. I was just pondering that if he could beat the programming as he did to take control and become Tri-Hard, that he couldn’t use the tech to undo or alter the remaining programming. He has the drive and the vision to certainly do more than the previous. A way for him to really break his own chains. But then with how you have setup the character, maybe its not needed.

2/22/24, 3:39 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Fixing what's 'wrong' with him is something Hank might set Ernst to do, but only once he has 'scratched the itch' of proving he's the REAL **Tri-Hard**. For now he has his former master creating tools and weapons to ensure the drones will be unstoppable. As he does better, Hank will naturally feel more _free_ from his compulsions anyway,... just one more incentive for him to follow through on doing the job! Thanks for bringing this up. It's good to air these thoughts; not just to be sure they're specified somewhere, but because it's nice to get your interpretation of things too! Got a mini-chapter dropping shortly, so I hope you enjoy that one too before the main story continues on from here! Thanks again!

2/23/24, 3:07 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) I am quite certain I will enjoy it. I've been overly eager for every chapter so far. Though if it is a mini, it makes me think it will some type of interlude. But regardless, I look forward to it.
Mind Bender
2/22/24, 11:52 PM
This was so hot. Something about Aaron being Frozen and his body catching up after the he is resumed. I wish I had this app 😭
Mind Bender
2/22/24, 11:47 PM
Wow this is great, can't wait to read more!

2/22/24, 11:49 PM
@Mind Bender Oh lord I forgot all about this story lol. Maybe one day I’ll continue it at some point… Just as soon as I remember how to decide what I want to happen next.
Mind Bender
2/22/24, 10:58 PM
This was a great story. I do like this ending better than the original. Great job 👍🏼
2/22/24, 9:33 PM
I’d like to see this thread continue.
Daddy Morsel
2/22/24, 7:08 PM
A more fun story after
2/21/24, 10:25 PM
I check for a second chapter regularly. CANNOT WAIT. Please post it!

CasualWanderer82
2/22/24, 5:58 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) I'm so glad you're invested. I've only just started writing it, though, so I hope you stick around!