Recent Comments

2/19/24, 8:54 PM
This was so good! You had me at the edge of my seat; I can’t wait to see more of Nick. Maybe he’ll do more than just a tutorial about how a real man aims while Sean is on his knees. Also I love how he keeps having accidents and how they occur. It’s so embarrassing and humiliating, I’m surprised his dad didn’t catch him.

2/19/24, 9:38 PM
@[Jack V](/user/show/909098) I am blown away by the responses and I am so glad you are liking the story! The chapters will not be coming in as quickly this week due to work and schedule, but rest assured that Sean does have an exciting weekend coming his way!
Martin
2/19/24, 9:19 PM
Very direct, right to the point, but doubtlessly hot as hell. But if it's really properly assigned to GaySpiral (mind control) is something future chapters have to proof. Are you sure that was correct?
Anonymous
2/19/24, 8:52 PM
Please a new chapter !! So good story!!
Feb 16, 2024
2/19/24, 1:10 AM
Thank you for this story, it was very "short" and sweet. Very good job balancing the fun and zany aspect while also being really hot and honing on the submissive portions of it! Well done!

2/19/24, 6:43 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thanks Franco! Glad you enjoyed it
2/19/24, 3:57 PM
I really enjoyed this and hope you continue on. My pen-name over on A03 is NotSoClean, so I must say that I'm happy to see others taking my ideas and making them their own. The kinkier the better, and this was definitely kinky.
Anonymous
2/19/24, 2:10 PM
Terrific
2/19/24, 5:31 AM
Wow WOW!

2/19/24, 1:40 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
2/19/24, 3:19 AM
Great and intriguing even if I wanted to see caveman Nick

2/19/24, 1:40 PM
@[Buck Whitman](/user/show/10001298) You did? Hmmm,... :thinking: :zipper_mouth_face:
2/19/24, 6:10 AM
That was amazing! I loved the glimpse into what happens in the VR helmet! Slowly melting the mind, I also adore the use of the ring and the toy to completely erase the mind