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Mind Bender
2/19/24, 11:37 PM
Very interesting concept! I like how touchy Tim is. I can't wait to read the next one to see how Randy responds to the second wish. Love it!
2/19/24, 11:06 PM
I say do teen wolf
Martin
2/19/24, 10:27 PM
That was a fun and hot read, even more so imagining that really happened to you! Please go on!
2/19/24, 6:35 PM
Very nice, did not saw the bears coming, that was so good, I am enjoying every single word of this story, next part will be the army and scientists, right? It will be fire, given how well you write, Also, given what you said about Texas, this is where the army story will happen? The governor will turn into a huge bull or buffalo? Or you are saving them for the university story Edit: I combined the two comments in one

2/19/24, 7:10 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I'm really glad you liked it! I was unsure if this one would be as good. I can confirm that the governor of texas will appear later i have plans for him! But it might not be in the next chapter...i haven't decided yet. But definitely not in the high school chapter.

2/19/24, 7:17 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Okay, so after the army/scientists and the college chapters, got it, maybe a public speach that slowly goes gay as he and the crowd succumb?

2/19/24, 10:03 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) what do you think?

2/19/24, 10:04 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I like it, I might use the speech angle haha I do have an extra idea as well!

2/19/24, 10:06 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) if possible, why not combine both? or if not, go for your idea and then, with the governor already turned, goes to his public speach?

2/19/24, 10:10 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) but that is just a suggestion
Martin
2/19/24, 9:59 PM
Absolutely fuckingly exceptionally hot!
2/19/24, 8:54 PM
This was so good! You had me at the edge of my seat; I can’t wait to see more of Nick. Maybe he’ll do more than just a tutorial about how a real man aims while Sean is on his knees. Also I love how he keeps having accidents and how they occur. It’s so embarrassing and humiliating, I’m surprised his dad didn’t catch him.

2/19/24, 9:38 PM
@[Jack V](/user/show/909098) I am blown away by the responses and I am so glad you are liking the story! The chapters will not be coming in as quickly this week due to work and schedule, but rest assured that Sean does have an exciting weekend coming his way!
Martin
2/19/24, 9:19 PM
Very direct, right to the point, but doubtlessly hot as hell. But if it's really properly assigned to GaySpiral (mind control) is something future chapters have to proof. Are you sure that was correct?
Anonymous
2/19/24, 8:52 PM
Please a new chapter !! So good story!!
Feb 16, 2024
2/19/24, 1:10 AM
Thank you for this story, it was very "short" and sweet. Very good job balancing the fun and zany aspect while also being really hot and honing on the submissive portions of it! Well done!

2/19/24, 6:43 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thanks Franco! Glad you enjoyed it
2/19/24, 3:57 PM
I really enjoyed this and hope you continue on. My pen-name over on A03 is NotSoClean, so I must say that I'm happy to see others taking my ideas and making them their own. The kinkier the better, and this was definitely kinky.