Recent Comments

2/19/24, 4:10 AM
I’m loving this story. I can’t wait for the next chapter.😜😜. I love when the contestants have one last chance to redeem themselves, try their hardest, and fail. Now their images and videos are going out to the world.
2/19/24, 2:34 AM
Keep coming back to this one. Love the female to male transformation.
Feb 17, 2024
2/19/24, 2:24 AM
For the most part I agree with what the other commentors have said. But I felt the whole sex angle was a bit tired for me. I know this is one of the things that makes the site unique for most writers and readers, but the whole sex slave angle is cliche IMO. I want to see different motivations than beside making men sex slaves for the enslavement; I also want to see more of the slave's point of view. I really enjoyed the expression of the pleasure of slavehood being told; I want to see more of that and more expansion of that.
2/19/24, 1:58 AM
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Anonymous
2/19/24, 12:07 AM
Keep it up!
2/18/24, 11:44 PM
Too bad we didn't get to find out his dad secretly watches fag porn online. It would be great to see his father confront him with what he has "accidentally discovered." Dad would insist he arrange to meet Mr Edwards, who could then work them both over and get some hot video of what two hardcore homophobes really enjoy.
Anonymous
2/18/24, 9:50 PM
I think the tied score means enough interest that it would be good to see both pathways :)
Feb 17, 2024
2/18/24, 9:28 PM
Thanks for the comments, glad the story found an audience!
2/18/24, 9:04 PM
Great job with the hypnotist's wording of his induction and deepening! I love the way Slave Richard's control and awareness of reality slipped away. I love the way Master Niall used a trigger for future use, erased Richard's memory of the whole street hypnosis incident, and covered up the entire situation as a television production.