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Anonymous
2/18/24, 9:50 PM
I think the tied score means enough interest that it would be good to see both pathways :)
Feb 17, 2024
2/18/24, 9:28 PM
Thanks for the comments, glad the story found an audience!
2/18/24, 9:04 PM
Great job with the hypnotist's wording of his induction and deepening! I love the way Slave Richard's control and awareness of reality slipped away. I love the way Master Niall used a trigger for future use, erased Richard's memory of the whole street hypnosis incident, and covered up the entire situation as a television production.
2/18/24, 8:55 PM
Keep checking back on his one. It was a great lead up, keep hoping we will get to see it play out!
2/18/24, 7:03 PM
Very good story, memorable. But I'm sorry, I want to ask a question. My memory and English are not very good. I remember the Parker brothers, but I don't remember Alexander Parker. Is this the character who appeared before and in which story?

2/18/24, 8:25 PM
@[zCanon](/user/show/10019162) He has never been seen before, that is Sammy an the brother's father.
2/18/24, 6:14 PM
I rented the first book on Kindle and it was pretty good. Does this mean that you have a sequel out?

2/18/24, 7:39 PM
@[Nnnrg](/user/show/969464) Yep, volume 2 just went up last week. Thanks for checking out the first one!
2/18/24, 6:55 PM
The story was excellently written, even though some of the kinks were less to my taste. I can see how Alex getting drunk with power is fitting. Reading back you can see certain points where Alex has shown complete lack of care towards Tommy, but I agree with those who think it was taken too far . I think the breaking point for me was when Alex said that he didn't really care about Tommy and that he intends to sell him after making him go through serious irreversible surgery. A lover creating his ultimate fantasy but keeping the love and protection as the dom is one thing. A maniac who tries to ruin a guy's life for fun and through him away when he gets bored is another. In the sake fairness I would have to admit that I am really on the "pro good ending team" so I am a bit biased. I hope I don't discourage you from writing, because you really are a good writer and at the end of the day it is a matter of taste.