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2/18/24, 6:14 PM
I rented the first book on Kindle and it was pretty good. Does this mean that you have a sequel out?

2/18/24, 7:39 PM
@[Nnnrg](/user/show/969464) Yep, volume 2 just went up last week. Thanks for checking out the first one!
2/18/24, 6:55 PM
The story was excellently written, even though some of the kinks were less to my taste. I can see how Alex getting drunk with power is fitting. Reading back you can see certain points where Alex has shown complete lack of care towards Tommy, but I agree with those who think it was taken too far . I think the breaking point for me was when Alex said that he didn't really care about Tommy and that he intends to sell him after making him go through serious irreversible surgery. A lover creating his ultimate fantasy but keeping the love and protection as the dom is one thing. A maniac who tries to ruin a guy's life for fun and through him away when he gets bored is another. In the sake fairness I would have to admit that I am really on the "pro good ending team" so I am a bit biased. I hope I don't discourage you from writing, because you really are a good writer and at the end of the day it is a matter of taste.
Feb 17, 2024
2/18/24, 6:39 PM
This is a very solid start. I think the mind control aspect and the resistance is really written well. It sounds like there will be more and I cant wait
Anonymous
2/18/24, 6:19 PM
Wonderful
2/13/24, 2:57 PM
Oh this was fun. I think I'd roll the dice and try this myself, given the option...

2/13/24, 11:40 PM
@[PTutius27](/user/show/979133) There are worse ways things could turn out, that's for sure.

2/18/24, 6:16 PM
@[PTutius27](/user/show/979133) The quality of the spell is highly variable and some of the casters are asshats. I wouldn't be too quick to go for it.
Jan 30, 2024
Anonymous
2/18/24, 5:47 PM
Excellent