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2/15/24, 5:04 PM
I just got an idea for a chapter or two in the story: a college being affected by the virus

2/15/24, 5:33 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Oh I am waaaay ahead of you! That's the plan for a future chapter! It is gonna be hot! All those sports teams! (next chaper should be published in the next day or two I am almost done :) )

2/15/24, 6:03 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Nice, so we still have the college and the labs, do you have any more ideas? Maybe the rest of the white house?

2/15/24, 6:17 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I did have an entire chapter for the White House in mind, but unfortunately I decided to ditch it! The scientists/army and the High School and hell...there's a lot of world out there! haha Possibilities are endless LOL

2/15/24, 6:20 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) A night club? Or it is to similar to the casino? And will the army and lab be a two-parter too?

2/15/24, 6:25 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Haha I don't know yet! But I don't think so

2/15/24, 6:32 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Okay, good luck with the project

2/15/24, 7:10 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I was going to do the scientists/army next, but maybe the school would be more fun? What's your preference haha

2/15/24, 7:41 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Well, i think the lab next will be better to close this loose end, and then the college, and maybe later a fair or a carnival?

2/15/24, 7:42 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) But it is your call, if you feel the school first is better, do it first

2/15/24, 7:44 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) If you want the lab first then the lab first it is :)

2/15/24, 7:51 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Okay, I hope it doesn't messes with your plot, as for the name of the army and lab chapter, I would like to suggest "engineering lust"
2/15/24, 7:37 PM
Really invested. Can’t wait to see how shopping goes
2/15/24, 2:09 AM
The story has evolved. It's not just zapping guys into frat bros anymore. It's changing lives.

2/15/24, 7:37 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Right?! I wrote the first couple chapters with the idea that I was making an easy mechanic for other people to add their own spin to. Now we’ve got relationships being healed, fratbros looking out for eachother, and… yeah dudes getting zapped. Super pleased with the way this series is going. This is a great community.
Feb 15, 2024
2/15/24, 7:36 PM
Hope this continues. Bizarrely hot.
2/15/24, 4:57 PM
Nice! Would love to see more!
2/15/24, 3:50 PM
The ending is really hot! I do wish the getting the soccer team and coworker part would be more elaborate ;)
Elm
2/15/24, 3:08 PM
So hot!!!😍
Elm
2/15/24, 3:02 PM
I love this series, thank you for taking the time to add to it! Just love my dumb bottom daddies 🥴
2/15/24, 2:39 PM
The written words about the smells... oh my gosh... I am triggered in such a great way to hear about the smells of men and the entrapment of another man by those smells. THIS STORY is so compelling and interesting. I love the sexy blond teammate that seems to be lingering about. It'll be so fun to see if you bring him into the storyline. The coach's influcence over the boys - I am enjoying it... cant wait to hear his story and how he does it. THANK YOU... wonderfully written and exciting.
2/15/24, 1:07 PM
Hope there is more.