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2/15/24, 1:07 PM
Hope there is more.
2/15/24, 9:53 AM
man if you ever come back and make a part two, I'd be ecstatic!
2/15/24, 7:48 AM
Now I wonder what the dad is doing for Gino right now ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”
2/15/24, 6:42 AM
really good build up and development. Equally strong capture of the audience and hold making you want to read more. Not at all slow in fact could have been longer once they got back to the cabin (greedy ready lol) with what happened the next morning. Jackson Stock is a valid hypnotist with actual skill, so it is good to "hear" it come across in his written work. He does other niche specific headings so I'd love to read those headline stories. Alpha Findom, Dom/sissy, role reversal, Alpha brothers and a family sissy brother. Am I greedy to ask for ideas because he can do it? No, I don't think so, because he is skilled when very few are.....
2/15/24, 6:11 AM
That was very fun, is this part 1?
2/15/24, 6:01 AM
What happened to the father? Love to see other contributors offer additional chapters to see where those authors take it. Thos chapters don't need to necessarily be at the end! Imagine a mid-story chapter of elaboration that expands this story with new depth...
Sep 21, 2023
2/15/24, 5:38 AM
Excellent concept!
2/15/24, 4:34 AM
๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
2/15/24, 3:45 AM
What happened to chapter 2? I read it earlier, but now it seems to be gone.

2/15/24, 4:23 AM
@[gregz](/user/show/605962) It is in the approval process again. I made a small change. Will be back soon.
2/15/24, 2:41 AM
Great story๏ผCan I translate this story into Chinese, please? I wish more people could read this story!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

2/15/24, 2:43 AM
@[CJK_EAST](/user/show/10021710) Thatโ€™s alright by me! Very cool!!

2/15/24, 4:07 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) cool!