Recent Comments

2/15/24, 2:09 AM
The story has evolved. It's not just zapping guys into frat bros anymore. It's changing lives.

2/15/24, 7:37 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Right?! I wrote the first couple chapters with the idea that I was making an easy mechanic for other people to add their own spin to. Now we’ve got relationships being healed, fratbros looking out for eachother, and… yeah dudes getting zapped. Super pleased with the way this series is going. This is a great community.
Feb 15, 2024
2/15/24, 7:36 PM
Hope this continues. Bizarrely hot.
2/15/24, 4:57 PM
Nice! Would love to see more!
2/15/24, 3:50 PM
The ending is really hot! I do wish the getting the soccer team and coworker part would be more elaborate ;)
Elm
2/15/24, 3:08 PM
So hot!!!😍
Elm
2/15/24, 3:02 PM
I love this series, thank you for taking the time to add to it! Just love my dumb bottom daddies 🥴
2/15/24, 2:39 PM
The written words about the smells... oh my gosh... I am triggered in such a great way to hear about the smells of men and the entrapment of another man by those smells. THIS STORY is so compelling and interesting. I love the sexy blond teammate that seems to be lingering about. It'll be so fun to see if you bring him into the storyline. The coach's influcence over the boys - I am enjoying it... cant wait to hear his story and how he does it. THANK YOU... wonderfully written and exciting.
2/15/24, 1:07 PM
Hope there is more.
2/15/24, 9:53 AM
man if you ever come back and make a part two, I'd be ecstatic!
2/15/24, 7:48 AM
Now I wonder what the dad is doing for Gino right now 🤔🤔🤔