Recent Comments

2/14/24, 2:37 PM
I think this is a solid length for consistency. This is an excellent story and so compelling. I like the characters and the give and take, slow burn. Quicker and consistent stories are ideal for me as a reader as there’s always something new (but quite satisfying) to come. I think for the writer it would make it fun, less of a chore and more easy to keep up and expand as you see fit. Looking forward to more!
Anonymous
2/14/24, 1:52 PM
Worth the wait and I'm glad there is still a to be continued on this story
HypnoFreak
2/14/24, 11:06 AM
I would love if the story gets a bit messier, to a stage where who's the slave and who's the master can't be clear, obviously with Nick. I do have a few good ideas to take this story series forward. 1. Just imagine that Nick himself was hypnotized by that "Mystical Michael" you had mentioned. Maybe we can take this story to another level if we bring in Michael as a villain who has not just hypnotized Nick but many others and has been teaching or better training his slaves like Nick and Eric of how to hypnotize and expand his army. 2. Maybe what Eric actually told Danny was half truth and he was actually still loyal to his twin....? Maybe he only agreed to Danny only as a programmed reflex to anyone trying to remove his early catchphrases. 3. Maybe Eric hypnotises Danny and coincidentally comes to know about the reality of the situation by Danny himself. But he still likes the sound of everything because of all the alterations Danny has done to his mind. He then along with Danny as a happy slave, goes on to gift Danny a new slave or master "Nick".
Anonymous
2/14/24, 10:56 AM
Can’t wait for part 2
2/14/24, 7:26 AM
Oh so amazing!!! Super hot! Can't wait for more

2/14/24, 10:24 AM
@[Anton729](/user/show/928205) Thank you, it means a lot, and I couldn't wait for more either!
2/14/24, 9:10 AM
Jake is such goals hahah:drooling_face:
2/14/24, 12:56 AM
MOAR

2/14/24, 5:03 AM
@AnonDog Gosh this needs a part 2
2/14/24, 4:59 AM
I love your stories where there are "special" clothes.
Anonymous
2/13/24, 10:44 PM
I'm really enjoying this series. Keep up the good work!

2/14/24, 4:08 AM
@Anonymous Thank you for your comment and for the encouragement. I appreciate hearing it and will keep going on because you like it. Please keep an eye out for the next chapter.
2/14/24, 4:04 AM
Hot and sinister! Looking forward to more wholesome family fun! I have a very strong suspicion I know who the writer is. If it isn’t who I’m thinking then they have done a great job of creating a tone in line with one of the best on the site.