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Dec 11, 2023
12/13/23, 3:33 AM
Two amazing chapters and then back to the waiting? You're so mean! And these comments are to both chapters. Reading how and when Midnight became a drone was a great flashback. How it transpired and why. Though what ultimately became of Minotaur? Was he released and forced to resign in shame and ridicule? Did he become a drone? Mentat has definitely proven that he is just as borderline diabolic as the rest of the tribunal. He is just more underhanded and manipulative about it. Though it is an interesting parallels to how he works with secrets and how Master Myriad does. Kane is about to find a lot of gratification and recognition with his new 'handlers'. He clearly is after these from his current superiors as isn't getting what he is after. Yet know after the 'cuddles' and the ring, I'm very confident he is about to switch sides willingly. Would be become some type of rubber hound for Master while being a DS because of his fetish though? Plus the whole scene with the twins was a hawt read. How they wrecked Kane, and then Onyx getting caught up into it too. Fun times with that. And I am very confident that my previous thoughts on Jamie's powers are correct. I am pretty certain how his powers revolve around some form of energy manipulation. And energy can be in so many forms and with so many uses, it explains his time at the gym. And his stunt as the mystery hero a couple chapters back. Though with these really productive gym sessions, is Jamie going to be putting on some new muscle as he utilizes these powers he doesn't know he has? It was quite as stark difference for Dusk between the flashback and his interactions with Master on the roof. Its almost like two different people. Though his feelings for Jamie is definitely going to keep playing in this story. And Jamie's to him. Its quite warming to read. I love how these chapters are progressing and your commitment to them. So well done! I already want the next 5 chapters.
12/13/23, 5:28 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) What became of Minotaur? I imagine we'll find out. Yep. Mentat is a grade A PoS. Nah. Kane may get or be brought there eventually, but he's very heavily imbued with the League's propaganda. Also, I think the point of the ring is to influence/move him without him being aware of it. Even he doesn't know he's now basically a DU, and it'll stay that way for a while. Good guess on Jamie's powers. It definitely is trending in that direction, and I agree. But since he's using his powers to lift the heavy weight, I don't think the lifting will add much muscle. The latex and other treatments available to Master may add a lot, however. The story has suggested as much. Dusk now versus Midnight/Archie then. It illustrates what merger with the symbiote does when the dronification reaches its culmination. Plus, he's probably undergone a fair amount of conditioning between then and now. I hope we get to see what his "reconditioning" looks like. And yeah, his feelings about Jamie will almost certainly play into what's to come. I also want the next five chapters, though I hope Jamie is Daybreaker by the time we finish Chapter 10 or 11.
12/13/23, 2:01 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) Minotaur has only been mentioned in passing. It sounds like he was made a drone. It would be another great flashpoint for both Archie and Minotaur to see how it all concluded. You are right about Kane being deeply ingrained said propaganda. Yet, he has proven over multiple chapters that wants to prove he is capable, reliable, and wants to be of greater use. Such as his interactions with Valour and Mentat. While simultaneously rejecting what he is drawn too: his musk fetish. Now that he is being linked up as he is now, he has the opportunity to get both. As he begins to do things for Myriad or Onyx, he is going to be rewarded. Either in pleasure or being pampered that he was doing a good job or both. And the musk can be a treat for him. But that is speculative. If Myriad wants these supers to come willingly, than Kane needs to understand what he is doing and willingly. I agree that the when Jamie is fully daybreak, he will get some more mass. And seems he already has when he was the mystery hero a couple chapters back. Really pairs well with powers like his to not have a body that matches. Though I suspect he will not become daybreak fully until around chapter 12-13 at least. I wouldn't be surprised if Kane becomes a drone before him. And I am definitely interested in that 'reconditioning' too. I really hope for details on what that is like.
1/15/24, 8:47 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thought I'd comment more on Midnight/Archie then (Chapter 8) vs 05/Dusk now because the two contrasting sequences were so well crafted. Feel free to comment back. What we're seeing is the difference in persective between Archie as a still free man and Archie as Master's 05/Dusk - a fully realized drone, with the man and symbiote one fully merged entity.. The Archie before could view Master objectively and conclude that he was mad. He might call and think of the man as "Master", but it was just a name. He was probably free to leave, but in any case he still had agency and choice, enough that he dared to try and extract a huge promise from Master, and got it. 05/Dusk has truly been "realigned". Master is no longer a name, but a genuine title and role. When he tries to avoid thinking of that title, the alternative he uses is "owner". That speaks volumes - he genuinely sees himself as property. That is who and what 05/Dusk/Archie is nowadays, and except in the worst moments of his backlash he doesn't see anything negative about that. Indeed, in his confrontation with Master, he glories in being Master's slave and puppet. Clearly 05/Dusk is still able to act in a way he knows Master will disapprove of, but he feels guilty and fearful while doing it, enough that he is trying to think of ways to temper Master's wrath. And when confronted by Master, he is immediately contrite. And his view of Master is of a person much more intelligent, knowledgeable, far seeing, and powerful than he is, one far above his own lowly status. So yeah, Archie is still there, but 05 and Dusk are who he is now, an owned drone slave whose mind and thought processes have been realigned to be what his Master and owner wants them to be. Master really does own his body, mind, and soul.
1/29/24, 2:15 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) Actually, I fully agree with this insight to the characters. Well thought out and well said.
2/13/24, 1:21 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thanks, Marik!
Feb 11, 2024
2/12/24, 3:18 AM
Leaking cum is so hot. I hope the guys at the Complex are made to leak all the time.
2/13/24, 12:53 AM
@[gregz](/user/show/605962) Just keep on reading and you'll see! :)
Feb 11, 2024
2/11/24, 7:37 PM
Very hot! I love how the website ensnared Jake. I hope Ryan comes back before Jake moves out and starts to get suspicious about how his entranced friend is acting, then goes to investigate the Complex himself...
2/13/24, 12:53 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Lets just say Ryan's role in this story will be...pivitol ;)
Feb 11, 2024
2/11/24, 6:12 PM
Great next chapter. Can’t wait for more
2/13/24, 12:53 AM
@[PJ34](/user/show/2558338) Hopefully not too much longer, just submitted it for approval, should be published soon. Thank you for reading!
Feb 11, 2024
2/11/24, 3:15 PM
Nice continuation! I'm excited to read about what happens when Jake starts living in The Complex.
2/13/24, 12:52 AM
@[monarch_mvl118](/user/show/28683) Third chapter definitely has some good twists ;)
Feb 11, 2024
2/13/24, 12:24 AM
Excited to see him subjugated by the suit!
Jan 26, 2024
2/12/24, 8:39 PM
Help…….need………more……
Mar 27, 2018
2/12/24, 8:31 PM
Always wished this continued.
Jan 22, 2024
Tranceguy
2/12/24, 8:19 PM
I didn't except the story starts like that. Hot! I enjoyed the dom/sub roles in it. I would really interested in the words of the tist in the therapy sessions. How he train him with hypnosis to get calm and submissive to him. But without that details, this story is fucking hot. I loved to click those links to the pics. :-D great! Thanks for this.
Feb 11, 2024
Zander
2/11/24, 10:23 PM
Thank you very much for this story and this idea.I hope new chapters will be published more often) I like this story with a more (realistic plot) and where the main character is not a stupid and naive blockhead and knows how to act in various cases and use everything to his advantage. And I also like the fact that he does not use people for selfish purposes, treating them like animals and does not rape.This story is kind of like a breath of fresh air.+ I like unexpected turns. I think the Dock is in the trail.the head is in for an unpleasant surprise and he will regret contacting Tony)
Anonymous
2/12/24, 6:07 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thank you! I keep trying to write them following my plot but they've been acting out of script since the breakfast scene. Expect the update sooner :)