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2/11/24, 5:54 PM
Excellent, but I still feel there’s a little more here. An epilogue maybe? Like what does the AI do out in the wild? Or how does the hypnotist fare managing the rubber shop, etc? And does the drone regain some humanity or does it embrace it’s new existence? Regardless, just about the hottest story here in a while. Kudos!

2/11/24, 6:25 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thanks, my friend! I really appreciate the encouragement. This chapter was the most fun to write out of all of them, but I felt like it was just getting less kinky and wank-worthy as I went. But I had this idea of how I wanted all the characters to develop and felt obligated to see it through, even if it turned out to be a flop. Originally, chapter 1 was meant to just be a stand-alone story. Then I got Covid and got stuck at home for the week, and spent the time integrating other ideas I had floating around in my head into this world. Honestly, chapter 2 is my personal favorite, but I’m here for transformation, not the actual sex. That story does something dirty to me. I reread it over and over again for editing, and still got horned up every time. 3 and 4 were a blast, and I’m glad everyone seems to enjoy them. All the first four chapters are like little windows into the secret, kinky parts of my mind. And who knows. There could be an epilogue. I was getting so sleepy last night, I finally had to call it quits on #5 before I just started typing gibberish. After the competition ends, I may even open this up as a community series. I think it would be hot to see what happens if some of the really great authors on this site decided to play with my toys. But thanks again. I really hope everyone has as much fun reading these as I did writing them. Keep it kinky, -The Author
2/11/24, 4:35 PM
Bring it on!

2/11/24, 6:23 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Will do
2/11/24, 5:59 PM
This is an AMAZING story! The transformation was incredibly hot—and as others have said, it was nice to have a happy ending, with everyone working together to save the day and prevent the amoral hypnotist from winning. Thanks for creating something so awesome! :D
2/11/24, 4:36 PM
I am IN! This story is so compelling. I appreciate the intimacy of course... but the passion is just incredible... AND THANK YOU for all the very personal elements that are provided... like the smells, the queef, the fingering...oh gosh... its perfect.

CasualWanderer82
2/11/24, 5:45 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Writing about gay sex MUST include all that, and then some! I'm happy you're taking the time to discover my work.
2/11/24, 2:15 PM
I love these men! Well written and, as always, I appreciate your consideration of the smells of the room, of David's hair, of their privates... it matters for a full "entry" into the experience. Its masterful. You are such a great writer.

CasualWanderer82
2/11/24, 5:44 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) I appreciate the compliment. It means a lot!
2/11/24, 4:14 PM
Love it. Can't wait for more
Hunter
2/11/24, 3:48 PM
God yes I love all your stories so much!!!!
2/11/24, 4:54 AM
When I saw this in my inbox for approval a few days ago, I couldn’t help but make a few tweaks. NayarLeng made a few in return, back and forth, until we ended up with what y’all see here. Like a lot of y’all know, I’ve been overloaded with a few things these last eight months and haven’t been posting. Still another nine to go before I’m done with the busy bits of life, but it was really nice to hop back in the saddle and contribute to a story. Thanks for writing this NayarLeng!

2/11/24, 3:35 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) It's my pleasure. I stumbled recently upon this site and this series of stories, right after I read it I just wanted to add a little contribution to it, and my mind burst with ideas. I really appreciate your revisions and feedback, it certainly enhanced the story.
2/11/24, 3:06 PM
You're a pro at writing sex scenes. Very tangible and vivid.
2/11/24, 1:45 AM
Hot.

CasualWanderer82
2/11/24, 1:33 PM
@Jonanator Thank you!