Recent Comments

6/5/25, 8:47 AM
Glad you returned to this!! Wanna see where else this goes
Kbl32
6/5/25, 4:40 AM
Awesome job! Great story!😜
6/5/25, 3:03 AM
I just love it!
Anonymous
1/1/25, 3:01 PM
awesome story! wish i could see more stories like this

6/5/25, 2:55 AM
@Anonymous that's nice of you to say. it would be constructive to find out what part of this story you'd like to see more of to keep in mind creating more stories.
11/14/24, 10:10 PM
The stories you published are pretty good (even if I find the sub-titles or not sure what they're meant to be to be more distracting than anything), but this one... ending with the MC's death makes it all a bummer rather than anything. I do commend you for attepting something unnusual, and the stories connecting like that is rewarding if one read everything.

6/5/25, 2:54 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) They're meant to be scene/chapter markers. I started doing them around that time. Unfortunately, I like them, so I will continue using that formatting. In my heart, the villain MC would have won in this story because that's where my proclivities usually align. But I was trying to challenge myself at that time and write against my instinct, and I was self-conscious how it would look to always have the villain winning/heroes losing in my stories.
Ford
6/5/25, 2:13 AM
This is such a great introductory chapter to the series. I love how James' been trying to resist but Dirk's "power" is just so captivating. I can really picture the flow of the story as it is written cohesively. I would love to read Dirk's adventure with an oblivious college jock who keeps on being enticed by Dirk. Where Dirk will be in a planned uncompromising situation that will serve as the bait for the college jock.
Anonymous
4/9/25, 5:15 PM
New chapter this week?

4/10/25, 7:17 AM
@Anonymous Hopefully this week, I'm busy in the last couple of days... I'm editing some changes before I post it..

Zander
6/4/25, 11:51 PM
@[Puppet Master](/user/show/142502) I'm waiting for the continuation of this story urgently 🫡. I like the length of the chapter and the characters, as well as the plot that is there (which is rare in such stories). I hope the next chapters will be even hotter and more erotic, and the hypnosis will be slower for the Bully Fathers. It will be interesting to see the submission of their Fathers and the transformation of their Mothers and sons into cuckolds) I hope there will also be dirty words during sex between Toby and the Bully Fathers. It is also worth praising the way you build the plot and how you lead everything to hypnosis (which is very pleasing) I have not seen such professional work for a long time. Will there be pictures of the characters? How do you see them? (created with AI) I hope there will be more chapters and we will also see how Toby will control celebrities Actors and Sportsmen (football - Messi, etc., and other men) The potential of the story is great. But I also hope that it will not be easy since the story is written with notes of realism (which is very pleasing) since the story can turn out differently. And honestly, it is not a fact that Toby will subjugate Alejandro since he has Huge experience (and experience plays a greater role than talent). In addition, it will be interesting to see characters who will not be hypnotized but will suspect and investigate, and if suddenly they find out and understand everything, they will not act rashly and go straight (since it is very dangerous and useless to fight hypnotists like that) I also hope that the story will have a good ending and Toby will come out with an instructive lesson in the end that great power requires great responsibility and that everything can always go wrong!
Zander
6/4/25, 11:48 PM
I'm waiting for the continuation of this story urgently 🫡. I like the length of the chapter and the characters, as well as the plot that is there (which is rare in such stories). I hope the next chapters will be even hotter and more erotic, and the hypnosis will be slower for the Bully Fathers. It will be interesting to see the submission of their Fathers and the transformation of their Mothers and sons into cuckolds) I hope there will also be dirty words during sex between Toby and the Bully Fathers. It is also worth praising the way you build the plot and how you lead everything to hypnosis (which is very pleasing) I have not seen such professional work for a long time. Will there be pictures of the characters? How do you see them? (created with AI) I hope there will be more chapters and we will also see how Toby will control celebrities Actors and Sportsmen (football - Messi, etc., and other men) The potential of the story is great. But I also hope that it will not be easy since the story is written with notes of realism (which is very pleasing) since the story can turn out differently. And honestly, it is not a fact that Toby will subjugate Alejandro since he has Huge experience (and experience plays a greater role than talent). In addition, it will be interesting to see characters who will not be hypnotized but will suspect and investigate, and if suddenly they find out and understand everything, they will not act rashly and go straight (since it is very dangerous and useless to fight hypnotists like that) I also hope that the story will have a good ending and Toby will come out with an instructive lesson in the end that great power requires great responsibility and that everything can always go wrong!
6/4/25, 11:19 PM
Sorry that I waited until the last chapter to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. It was consistently hot and exciting! Thanks for sharing your writing talents with this group! Hope that you'll continue with this trio of Batman, Robin, and Batlad. I'm sure there are other villains (like Sandman) who would like to get their hands on these hunky caped crusaders!
Acon
6/4/25, 3:56 AM
Noah is a master of manipulation. The way he teases Liam; psychologically and physically torturing him while giving him more pleasure than he ever imagined. Perfect BDSM

lukas pucci
6/4/25, 10:21 PM
@Acon you got that right. noah’s fucking unforgivable!