Recent Comments

2/10/24, 1:20 PM
FANTASTIC... I particularly loved the POV back-and-forth... and hearing what Dante said to influence the boy. GREAT WORK...well-written
Anonymous
2/10/24, 12:06 PM
Hot as fuck!!!
2/10/24, 11:24 AM
Interesting premise but readability would be greatly improved by editing for spelling, grammar, paragraph breaks and naming consistency.
2/10/24, 4:22 AM
So happy to see you writing again. Can't wait for more!
Anonymous
2/10/24, 2:52 AM
This was a cool story!
10/17/23, 3:51 AM
Even if you don't finish the story before October ends, could you please keep writing on this because it's one of the fun stories on the site?

10/23/23, 9:09 PM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) Yes I plan to have at least 3 more chapters posted before or not to long after Halloween.

Anonymous
2/10/24, 2:43 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) How about another chapter for Mardi Gras coming up
2/9/24, 11:37 PM
hell yea buddy, fired up a 60 and busted a thick load to this one
2/9/24, 10:48 PM
Yes more please
Anonymous
2/9/24, 10:39 PM
Pleeeease can we have more chapters? This is by far the hottest story on here!!
2/9/24, 2:11 PM
The Alpha... He is a masterpiece. His rough hands. LOVE. So compelling and well-written. THANK YOU

2/9/24, 9:22 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks man, i like him as well