Recent Comments

2/8/24, 7:31 PM
Great set up! I hope the next chapter is coming soon, because I'm very eager to see what's in store for our protagonist.

2/8/24, 8:35 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Feeling actual star struck, your stories are LEGENDARY! Means a lot coming from you saying great set up, hoping to have the next chapter published soon :)
2/8/24, 6:21 AM
Amazing start. Can’t wait for more.

2/8/24, 8:34 PM
@[PJ34](/user/show/2558338) Thank you so much for reading! Hope to have the next chapter posted and next few chapters written soon :D
Martin
2/8/24, 8:34 PM
Damn, you can't just let the story end there... I'm leaking now and need to know what happens next!
2/8/24, 3:59 AM
Great start! Also, is the protagonist's name Kyle or Jake? In the description it's Kyle but throughout most of the story it's Jake, and Kyle again in the last few paragraphs. Sorry, just something I noticed.

2/8/24, 8:34 PM
@[monarch_mvl118](/user/show/28683) Thank you so much for catching that! I thought I fixed it, I have all of the characters names and arcs and what not planned out so sometimes I get ahead of myself. I'll fix it here and be more careful in the future, thank you for reading! :)
hairyartist
2/8/24, 7:23 PM
I love it thank you
2/8/24, 4:27 PM
This truly is one of the great stories on this site. A joy to revisit.
2/8/24, 4:09 PM
Dang, but I love the way your mind works, @jackparker!!
2/8/24, 3:33 PM
Very hot and very wholesome :)
2/8/24, 2:28 PM
Great and hot chapter.
2/8/24, 2:19 PM
i wanna ride on that plane. WOW!