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2/8/24, 9:15 PM
You are the reason I get up in the morning
Feb 8, 2024
2/8/24, 9:11 PM
You are one of the masters of the unaware type of mind control on here! This was amazing work as always. I'm just sad that it was over that quickly lol. I might have to read again!
1/10/24, 10:51 PM
I really like this story, especially the first chapter. It's one of my favorite stories on this site. I'm really sad that you don't write anymore. Your story is 10 years old, but for me it is one of the hottest stories on this entire site. Sometimes I think that older stories are much hotter than the stories today. Anyway, after 10 years, I just wanted to say thank you for this great story. I had - and still have - a lot of fun reading this story over and over again :sweat_drops: :smile:

2/8/24, 8:50 PM
@[Finn](/user/show/10003917) In my true lack of not paying attention to notifications, I've only just noticed this comment, which I'm very grateful for. And the reason I've just noticed it, is I'm checking a couple details for another instalment of Ad 😮
2/8/24, 7:31 PM
Great set up! I hope the next chapter is coming soon, because I'm very eager to see what's in store for our protagonist.

2/8/24, 8:35 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Feeling actual star struck, your stories are LEGENDARY! Means a lot coming from you saying great set up, hoping to have the next chapter published soon :)
2/8/24, 6:21 AM
Amazing start. Can’t wait for more.

2/8/24, 8:34 PM
@[PJ34](/user/show/2558338) Thank you so much for reading! Hope to have the next chapter posted and next few chapters written soon :D
Martin
2/8/24, 8:34 PM
Damn, you can't just let the story end there... I'm leaking now and need to know what happens next!
2/8/24, 3:59 AM
Great start! Also, is the protagonist's name Kyle or Jake? In the description it's Kyle but throughout most of the story it's Jake, and Kyle again in the last few paragraphs. Sorry, just something I noticed.

2/8/24, 8:34 PM
@[monarch_mvl118](/user/show/28683) Thank you so much for catching that! I thought I fixed it, I have all of the characters names and arcs and what not planned out so sometimes I get ahead of myself. I'll fix it here and be more careful in the future, thank you for reading! :)
hairyartist
2/8/24, 7:23 PM
I love it thank you
2/8/24, 4:27 PM
This truly is one of the great stories on this site. A joy to revisit.
2/8/24, 4:09 PM
Dang, but I love the way your mind works, @jackparker!!