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Anonymous
4/9/25, 5:15 PM
New chapter this week?

4/10/25, 7:17 AM
@Anonymous Hopefully this week, I'm busy in the last couple of days... I'm editing some changes before I post it..

Zander
6/4/25, 11:51 PM
@[Puppet Master](/user/show/142502) I'm waiting for the continuation of this story urgently 🫡. I like the length of the chapter and the characters, as well as the plot that is there (which is rare in such stories). I hope the next chapters will be even hotter and more erotic, and the hypnosis will be slower for the Bully Fathers. It will be interesting to see the submission of their Fathers and the transformation of their Mothers and sons into cuckolds) I hope there will also be dirty words during sex between Toby and the Bully Fathers. It is also worth praising the way you build the plot and how you lead everything to hypnosis (which is very pleasing) I have not seen such professional work for a long time. Will there be pictures of the characters? How do you see them? (created with AI) I hope there will be more chapters and we will also see how Toby will control celebrities Actors and Sportsmen (football - Messi, etc., and other men) The potential of the story is great. But I also hope that it will not be easy since the story is written with notes of realism (which is very pleasing) since the story can turn out differently. And honestly, it is not a fact that Toby will subjugate Alejandro since he has Huge experience (and experience plays a greater role than talent). In addition, it will be interesting to see characters who will not be hypnotized but will suspect and investigate, and if suddenly they find out and understand everything, they will not act rashly and go straight (since it is very dangerous and useless to fight hypnotists like that) I also hope that the story will have a good ending and Toby will come out with an instructive lesson in the end that great power requires great responsibility and that everything can always go wrong!
Zander
6/4/25, 11:48 PM
I'm waiting for the continuation of this story urgently 🫡. I like the length of the chapter and the characters, as well as the plot that is there (which is rare in such stories). I hope the next chapters will be even hotter and more erotic, and the hypnosis will be slower for the Bully Fathers. It will be interesting to see the submission of their Fathers and the transformation of their Mothers and sons into cuckolds) I hope there will also be dirty words during sex between Toby and the Bully Fathers. It is also worth praising the way you build the plot and how you lead everything to hypnosis (which is very pleasing) I have not seen such professional work for a long time. Will there be pictures of the characters? How do you see them? (created with AI) I hope there will be more chapters and we will also see how Toby will control celebrities Actors and Sportsmen (football - Messi, etc., and other men) The potential of the story is great. But I also hope that it will not be easy since the story is written with notes of realism (which is very pleasing) since the story can turn out differently. And honestly, it is not a fact that Toby will subjugate Alejandro since he has Huge experience (and experience plays a greater role than talent). In addition, it will be interesting to see characters who will not be hypnotized but will suspect and investigate, and if suddenly they find out and understand everything, they will not act rashly and go straight (since it is very dangerous and useless to fight hypnotists like that) I also hope that the story will have a good ending and Toby will come out with an instructive lesson in the end that great power requires great responsibility and that everything can always go wrong!
6/4/25, 11:19 PM
Sorry that I waited until the last chapter to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. It was consistently hot and exciting! Thanks for sharing your writing talents with this group! Hope that you'll continue with this trio of Batman, Robin, and Batlad. I'm sure there are other villains (like Sandman) who would like to get their hands on these hunky caped crusaders!
Acon
6/4/25, 3:56 AM
Noah is a master of manipulation. The way he teases Liam; psychologically and physically torturing him while giving him more pleasure than he ever imagined. Perfect BDSM

lukas pucci
6/4/25, 10:21 PM
@Acon you got that right. noah’s fucking unforgivable!
Anonymous
6/4/25, 7:59 PM
I've thoroughly enjoyed the slow, subtle changes Dimitri has gone through, and am incredibly excited for what Victor has in store for him. Hope you continue.
Island Jock
6/4/25, 4:44 PM
Im loving this story!!!! Please let Elliot dominate his dad!

6/4/25, 6:50 PM
@[Island Jock](/user/show/925246) Thank you for the feedback. I'm glad you love it.
6/4/25, 3:13 PM
Very nice. I'm kind of hoping that the next chapter is Skylar at the door and Elliot coming home to his masculine father pounding his twink boyfriend among many other things before joining in himself.

6/4/25, 3:17 PM
@[Ragnarok](/user/show/14073) Haha—love where your mind’s going with this… let’s just say you’re definitely picking up on the right signals. Things are about to get a lot more intense for Elliot, Richard… and yes, maybe even Skyler. Thanks for reading—next chapter won’t disappoint. 🔥😉

6/4/25, 4:31 PM
@[hmsl](/user/show/72172) Oh I'm sure it won't. Hopefully we won't have to wait too long for it.

6/4/25, 6:49 PM
@[Ragnarok](/user/show/14073) Next week, I promise.
tim
6/4/25, 1:18 PM
really well written with great character development and narrative... super hot!!!

6/4/25, 5:33 PM
@tim Thank you ☺ glad you enjoyed it!
6/4/25, 5:18 PM
Thank you! Please continue, hope his dad gets fucked too soon, maybe after fucking Ivan, and I Austin needs to go deeper and deeper
6/4/25, 3:44 PM
This is gripping!