Recent Comments

2/7/24, 6:48 PM
This has been a GREAT thread! I'm sorry to see it end. I thought the characters were terrific, the writing excellent, and I loved the way hypnosis was weaved into the story to change the two lovers to be under control of their new roommate. I wish this story wasn't over and I hope that it can be continued, or the characters used to start a new string of stories. VERY WELL DONE!!!!
slave2Lock
2/7/24, 5:56 PM
could only dream of being as "lucky" as Marlton, what i would give to be next up for the position! :drooling_face: :fire:

2/7/24, 6:09 PM
@slave2Lock But his situation is inescapable. Surely you wouldn't want to 'suffer' like that, on and on. (wink, wink)
very much enjoyed story
2/7/24, 4:13 PM
I do hope there will be further instalments to enjoy.
Anonymous
2/7/24, 3:51 PM
such a hot ending
2/7/24, 3:31 PM
I need another chapter!
2/7/24, 3:09 PM
Its been so long waiting for your update story Hopefully can get a new story from u
2/7/24, 2:01 PM
Not where I was expecting this to go after chapter one, but definitely not complaining! I really like how you were able to just explain something from chapter 1 that most people would just take as porn logic and flipped it into something even sexier than that.
2/7/24, 1:40 PM
This has been an absolute PLEASURE. What a FUN story and GREAT storytelling. So unique. I am a huge fan of all the references to the smells and man smells and cologne... Also, the intentional way that you brought the reader with the boys as they descended the stairs. That was masterful. When craig snaps his fingers and points to his dick in a previous chapter. That was just intensely erotic and exciting. THANK YOU for this story. I hope you keep writing.
1/31/24, 8:18 PM
No way can you make another bad ending for these guys. They need a win, for real! it gets to where there has to be victory for them to get to the next level and then face further struggle. it can't stay at its current progression because it will cause it to drone on and on. Rather than keep interesting. i like the story very much but I think it needs more of them succeeding at something because it feels like theyve been kept at the same place for many chapters now without any advancing in their control of their powers or in their ability to work around the mind control and telekinetic powers.. Those seem insurmountable when used and i feel the frustration in their struggle every time theyre captured in it. because they should have formulated a way to protect themselves from it. the last time it was Carl who broke the telekinetic hold. but you have yet to allow our heroes to learn a means to break free. they need a come to Jesus moment and stop dicking around to figure out a legit plan! thats just my feeling about the whole thing..its your story. i like what youve been doing with it and playing the back and forth but id like to see advancement if only for the sake of the story itself.

1/31/24, 11:50 PM
@[musclejunky](/user/show/10019676) Thank you for saying so, and you're certainly right. I planed to steer the plot towards a more favorable heading for the heroes, but it has been slower going than I intended. The next chapter should represent a step in that direction, but I won't spoil anything here.

2/2/24, 12:00 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) You always make my day when I see a new chapter drop! While I do agree with musclejunky to a point to have the story more actively progress. You have clearly laid the ground work for much more to come. Just as several things came full circle last chapter. Though there is something to be said about another bad ending with Hank now the main villian. Would Hank provide his personal training to Nick to make him into a rubber pup? He clearly has developed an interest in him and a rivalry hate for Henry. If Lee hadn't wasted his time he would have won. Yet Nick is getting more and more attention and he can't deny he likes it. And I love that. While I know you won't spoil anything I am pretty sure the boys are heading back to Mom. And that is definitely going to be interesting for so many reasons.

2/2/24, 2:15 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) A Hank ending and going to see mom,..? I dunno :thinking: I guess you'll just have to wait and see! :zipper_mouth_face::yum:

2/7/24, 1:27 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) This might be giving too much away, but will Hank be continuing to make his changes? He is making a new ‘super’ team. Though are they going to be geared as he wants them? They are currently like cops in mockery of who they were before, but does that still apply? Will the new rubber pups have any cosmetic changes? Or even the old Tri-Hard. What is he going to be wearing from now on?

2/7/24, 7:34 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Hank _is_ going to keep making changes and this includes the appearance of his drones. He is going to be going for a more practical approach than the old **Tri-Hard**, but you'll have to wait and see how :p
Mr. King TK
5/31/19, 6:13 PM
With every chapter, I have observed that Kaa and Mowgli’s romantic aspects of their twisted relationship is gradually increasing. Despite that, I love how Kaa authoritatively maintains that he is the one under control of the entire situation and, of course, under control of Mowgli’s very existence. His dominance over Mowgli is perhaps the most beautiful, seductive and erotic entity of the series The author not only has a kinky mind but a creative one as well and his storytelling ability shows that he is well-versed in the hypno/coil fetish. I applaud how you have dealt with the evolution of Mowgli as a character. He always tried to resist and overcome Kaa’s spell but with the passage of time, he’s now his obedient slave who strives for the complete satisfaction of his master’s desires. Eagerly waiting for more (and longer) chapters to continue this magnificent piece of erotic literature. It is so primal and unbelievably hot. The mancub needs to know his place – servitude for Kaa. I wonder if Kaa would torture Mowgli again. His tongue is venomous and I wonder if he’ll use it on the mancub for his sadistic amusement.

2/7/24, 5:47 AM
@Mr. King TK Sir, I absolutely love your summary of the things you love about the story!! I too love the slow tantalizing exchange of power as their connection becomes stronger. I love how Kaa is now consistently in complete and utter control, ever deepening, even as he allows Mowgli to feel his own strength and prowess. Like you, Sir, I love how Kaa has turned a petulant boy into a devoted slave. I love how Kaa plans to continue corrupting Mowgli with hypnosis-empowered lust and kink and servitude. Most of all what I love about your comments, Sir, is that you seem to take pleasure particularly from Kaa's domination of Mowgli, while i take pleasure particularly from the thought of Mowgli's subjugation and servitude to Kaa, while both of us enjoy this delicious shift in power.