Recent Comments

2/6/24, 9:14 PM
I can’t wait for part 2 of this. This is your best story yet. I loved that he put his cum filled sneaker on!

2/7/24, 8:16 PM
@[Sneakerguysz10](/user/show/10007391) Thank you! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: putting on a cum-filled sneaker is a great feeling :grin: :grin:
Anonymous
2/7/24, 4:11 AM
I just hope Jack became like Bryan and he and Bryan jocked one of Jack’s former friends, who betrayed him.

2/7/24, 8:14 PM
@Anonymous careful, if you give me good ideas I might just steal them! :grin:
2/7/24, 6:48 PM
This has been a GREAT thread! I'm sorry to see it end. I thought the characters were terrific, the writing excellent, and I loved the way hypnosis was weaved into the story to change the two lovers to be under control of their new roommate. I wish this story wasn't over and I hope that it can be continued, or the characters used to start a new string of stories. VERY WELL DONE!!!!
slave2Lock
2/7/24, 5:56 PM
could only dream of being as "lucky" as Marlton, what i would give to be next up for the position! :drooling_face: :fire:

2/7/24, 6:09 PM
@slave2Lock But his situation is inescapable. Surely you wouldn't want to 'suffer' like that, on and on. (wink, wink)
very much enjoyed story
2/7/24, 4:13 PM
I do hope there will be further instalments to enjoy.
Anonymous
2/7/24, 3:51 PM
such a hot ending
2/7/24, 3:31 PM
I need another chapter!
2/7/24, 3:09 PM
Its been so long waiting for your update story Hopefully can get a new story from u
2/7/24, 2:01 PM
Not where I was expecting this to go after chapter one, but definitely not complaining! I really like how you were able to just explain something from chapter 1 that most people would just take as porn logic and flipped it into something even sexier than that.
2/7/24, 1:40 PM
This has been an absolute PLEASURE. What a FUN story and GREAT storytelling. So unique. I am a huge fan of all the references to the smells and man smells and cologne... Also, the intentional way that you brought the reader with the boys as they descended the stairs. That was masterful. When craig snaps his fingers and points to his dick in a previous chapter. That was just intensely erotic and exciting. THANK YOU for this story. I hope you keep writing.