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2/4/24, 11:29 PM
Great story! Hope for more

2/5/24, 6:51 AM
@[Dannylydbi](/user/show/14921) Thank you!
2/4/24, 11:09 PM
Excellent first chapter! Can’t wait to see more!

2/5/24, 6:49 AM
@[Bostonhypno](/user/show/1081814) Thank you!
2/4/24, 6:16 PM
I enjoyed this storey a lot, I hope it gets a sequel

2/5/24, 6:49 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Thank you! Still pondering if I'd leave this is a single chapter story or if I'd continue it
Yongyuthx
2/5/24, 6:38 AM
Thanks for another great chapter. I really like it when Jaoquin was molested by his future father in law at the back of the car behind his future bride. And also the fact that Ron is the bottom now and Jaoquin is the bottom for the bottom.
2/5/24, 5:26 AM
Whoah! Hell yeah!
2/5/24, 5:13 AM
😏
Anonymous
1/17/24, 4:53 PM
Great to see you back. To be honest most of the time I check this website now is just to see if you (and a couple of others) have posted anything new. If you ever get any other platforms like twitter or tumblr, be sure to share. I would love to see what turns you on. Either way, I really look forward to new stories from you (and maybe some more sequels....).

2/5/24, 5:06 AM
@Anonymous This!!! Same here!!! You are my favourite writer.
hvt
2/5/24, 4:39 AM
Been looking forward to this one for a while, and it did not disappoint! You keep finding super hot ways for Joaquin to continue his descent.
2/4/24, 7:29 PM
I remember this story from FA a long time ago. It was hot! Are you thinking about continuing it?

2/4/24, 7:47 PM
@[Gorbant](/user/show/927166) Yes. Tho I felt that chapter 1 was too long, so I’ve cut it in half, so chapter 2 here on the GSS will be the other half, and chapter 3 here will be the former Ch2, and so on. I’m also tweaking, removing, and editing the procession so it’s not so smutty and horny right off the bat; like the titty-fucking with Kayden will be delayed to a further chapter. I want it to be less of the infamous furry orgy theme and more of a quirky build up… If that makes any sense? If possible at all. I have a conclusion planned, it’s the chain of events that I’m worried about…

2/5/24, 4:21 AM
@[NewsScene](/user/show/270454) Yeah, I think editing it with the benefit of time and perspective will help out a lot. While I really enjoyed the original 5 (?) chapters, the pacing and progression was a bit muddy.

2/5/24, 4:35 AM
@[Gorbant](/user/show/927166) But this also means I’ll need to update the chapters on my FA to make sure there’s none too many spoilers for each update on do here on GSS 😭
2/5/24, 4:02 AM
Another great chapter.