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2/4/24, 6:34 PM
Backstory and worldbuilding is something I think you excel in. It makes your characters more memorable than the typical hypno-erotica casts, who are generally interchangeable except for minor details. You'll never hear me complain about them!

2/4/24, 9:49 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) I read Forums all the time where writers are like, "I create all this backstory that never gets on the page" and I'm like, "Geez, ALL the backstory I create gets in there -- that's why I create it."
2/4/24, 9:37 PM
I hope to see part two soon.
2/4/24, 9:05 PM
I liked this a lot. Made my cock REAL hard. I think it was pretty well-written. My only criticism was that the dialogue was uncredited -- I didn't know for sure who was speaking. I had to really think about the context and pick which one was saying the lines, which took me out of the story a tiny bit. But I really thought this was hot/creepy as fuck.
2/4/24, 3:45 PM
Rod Hardwood. Nice.

2/4/24, 8:14 PM
@[Deej](/user/show/1464168) Damn — you caught me. I was gonna make a joke about it later in the story, but yeah. And his dad is Johnson. Go figure…
2/4/24, 6:59 PM
will this story get a second part? like, for example, seeing how people now live on the pro-fat worlds, like some jocks of bodybuilders are now in a world where fat is good

2/4/24, 7:08 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) It's entirely possible! I'm working on a different story right now but when I'm finished I could imagine creating a follow up to this one now that I know people are interested!

2/4/24, 7:12 PM
@[Whet-Dream](/user/show/888271) nice, thanks

2/4/24, 7:18 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) No problem, thanks for being so interested in my work, and taking the time to read my story!

2/4/24, 7:23 PM
@[Whet-Dream](/user/show/888271) you are welcome
2/4/24, 7:17 PM
Hoping his words change him into a bigger titted and assed himbo with a donut hole. Hot writing!
2/4/24, 6:58 PM
I can picture Trevor waddling around his apartment, wagging his double-bubble butt at Tony, to lure him to the bedroom. Trevor will constantly crave attention to be paid to his man-boobs and shrunken member.
2/4/24, 5:05 PM
That was such a fun ride, but I have a question, how did Tony changed?

Anonymous
2/4/24, 6:25 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Thanks for reading my story! And to answer your question about Tony, they went through Trevor's phone and contacted Tony, most likely luring him there and doing the same thing to him as they did to Trevor.

2/4/24, 6:40 PM
@Anonymous makes senes to me
Dec 22, 2023
2/4/24, 6:15 PM
Intriguing, I'm waiting for the sequel 😉
2/4/24, 5:03 PM
I've been loving this story. I didn't expect Jackson's transformation to have such a different flavor to it, and that's been delicious, especially seeing it through Damien's eyes. Each chapter of this has been a delight, and I'm looking forward to the next.