Recent Comments

Zander
2/4/24, 11:38 PM
I liked the first chapter, I hope the sequel will be released soon.
Jan 12, 2024
2/3/24, 5:09 AM
Fucking HOT!!!

2/4/24, 10:52 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thank youu!! <3
2/4/24, 1:27 PM
I was hoping Jax would also be affected by the wish and left with some transformation afterwards, I think it'd be hotter

2/4/24, 10:30 PM
@[Somnius](/user/show/648890) Gotta keep something back to ensure you return for more ;)
2/4/24, 6:34 PM
Backstory and worldbuilding is something I think you excel in. It makes your characters more memorable than the typical hypno-erotica casts, who are generally interchangeable except for minor details. You'll never hear me complain about them!

2/4/24, 9:49 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) I read Forums all the time where writers are like, "I create all this backstory that never gets on the page" and I'm like, "Geez, ALL the backstory I create gets in there -- that's why I create it."
2/4/24, 9:37 PM
I hope to see part two soon.
2/4/24, 9:05 PM
I liked this a lot. Made my cock REAL hard. I think it was pretty well-written. My only criticism was that the dialogue was uncredited -- I didn't know for sure who was speaking. I had to really think about the context and pick which one was saying the lines, which took me out of the story a tiny bit. But I really thought this was hot/creepy as fuck.
2/4/24, 3:45 PM
Rod Hardwood. Nice.

2/4/24, 8:14 PM
@[Deej](/user/show/1464168) Damn — you caught me. I was gonna make a joke about it later in the story, but yeah. And his dad is Johnson. Go figure…
2/4/24, 6:59 PM
will this story get a second part? like, for example, seeing how people now live on the pro-fat worlds, like some jocks of bodybuilders are now in a world where fat is good

2/4/24, 7:08 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) It's entirely possible! I'm working on a different story right now but when I'm finished I could imagine creating a follow up to this one now that I know people are interested!

2/4/24, 7:12 PM
@[Whet-Dream](/user/show/888271) nice, thanks

2/4/24, 7:18 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) No problem, thanks for being so interested in my work, and taking the time to read my story!

2/4/24, 7:23 PM
@[Whet-Dream](/user/show/888271) you are welcome
2/4/24, 7:17 PM
Hoping his words change him into a bigger titted and assed himbo with a donut hole. Hot writing!
2/4/24, 6:58 PM
I can picture Trevor waddling around his apartment, wagging his double-bubble butt at Tony, to lure him to the bedroom. Trevor will constantly crave attention to be paid to his man-boobs and shrunken member.