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2/2/24, 5:21 PM
I loved this one, I did not expect the president to fall this soon, but I think his scientists are still working, so there is that, also can you give us a tip to what Mark will become?

2/2/24, 5:56 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I do know, but I'm not gonna reveal it as it is part of the next chapter. I will say though that expect more species to start popping up! Glad you enjoyed it!

2/2/24, 5:58 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Nice, I am loving the variety, also, the scientists must be freaking out now that the president succumbed

2/2/24, 7:13 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I hadn't really thought about them...if you'd like me to include something about them in a future chapter I'd be happy to oblige

2/2/24, 7:23 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) That would be good, it would tie that loose end in a nice bow

2/2/24, 7:40 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) I mean, Denard was turned, but we don't know avout his team, so seeing the good doctor turning them would be nice

2/2/24, 7:49 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I will see what I can come up with ..hmmm science might make things interesting

2/2/24, 7:52 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Thank you, but you don't have to do it, it was just a suggestion, you do what you feel will help the story

2/2/24, 9:04 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) still, thanks for the interst for my ideas

2/2/24, 9:11 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) You're my audience! I am interested in what you'd like to see :grinning:

2/2/24, 9:15 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Yeah, but the idea and story still is yours
2/2/24, 7:34 PM
Oh I'm already looking forward to Christian's mental and physical changes.

2/2/24, 9:04 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I didn't plan much going in to this story, but one thing I knew was that the story would have an epilogue that mirrored the prologue, only this time, show the guys BACK in their individual realities AFTER visiting the Ranch. I'm sure that what I have in mind for Christian will be very satisfying for the reader. (I gave a very subtle hint in the prologue -- especially the inclusion of Ivan -- but you'll see...)
2/2/24, 8:22 PM
Hell yeah!! This is gonna be great. 😈
Anonymous
2/2/24, 7:21 PM
diese geschichte war heiß
LVM
1/31/24, 3:20 AM
Woah! Woah! Please write more!! The story got hot when the POV shifted to the MC (was) in the Dad's psyche!! Maybe focus on that direction in the next part??

2/2/24, 6:12 PM
@[LVM](/user/show/10036073) Thanks for the comment! I am planning to do that as the original Kazuhiro will not be central for the next chapter as it will focus on Masaru and Haruto becoming a couple. I want to emphasise a bit on the perverse nature of Haruto finally getting his dream man without knowing the truth
1/25/24, 11:33 PM
I like it already, I can’t wait to see the further corruption 😈

2/2/24, 6:10 PM
@[EvanIshihara96](/user/show/10002685) Thanks! I will be corrupting Masaru in the sexual aspect and not the evil aspect if that makes sense.
ann
1/26/24, 3:07 AM
Love the concept

2/2/24, 6:09 PM
@[ann](/user/show/10005606) Sorry for the late reply, thank you so much!
2/2/24, 9:01 AM
What a great read!

2/2/24, 6:04 PM
@[monarch_mvl118](/user/show/28683) Thank you for your comment; I'm very happy to hear that you enjoyed it. Working on the next chapter; once it's posted I hope you'll read it and enjoy it too!
X
2/2/24, 5:43 PM
new chapter this week?
Anon
2/2/24, 11:09 AM
Amazing story! Can't wait to read more!