Recent Comments

2/1/24, 8:45 PM
i appreciate the indulgence, just hot fat bald boys loving on each other
CRH
2/1/24, 8:11 PM
i loved the transformation
2/1/24, 8:06 PM
Creepy and hot. I hope you plan to continue.
CRW
2/1/24, 7:52 PM
I disagree with the other guy. I have no clue why they find the narrator unreliable. I don't get that at all. Anyway, I like the first-person POV. It's unique and stands out among the other stories in this group. Plant transformation is uncommon, but idk if it's that original. The grafting concept does elevate the originality. The transformation was descriptively described. My only critique is that it skews heavy on the backstory and less balanced toward the freaky stuff, which is what I'm here to read.
2/1/24, 6:00 PM
It... It needs a bit more polish tbh. Personally, I think it should have leaned more on the unreliable narrator trope but that's just me. There are some parts that don't flow as well but the concepts are there.
2/1/24, 5:37 PM
You’re off to such a great start here! I REALLY hope you’ll continue it PLEASE!!!
2/1/24, 4:18 PM
Love this story. Hope we get more
2/1/24, 1:43 PM
THe description of that bedroom... the mirror on the ceiling. Watching himself while Mr Franks enjoyed the young man... OMGosh. MAGIC
Apr 12, 2023
2/1/24, 1:18 PM
This blew my mind