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1/30/24, 2:42 AM
@Martin, I guess you mean January 30 in European time because it's January 29 in the States and I just finished reading this leg of the story. I like this ending. It's not an overwhelming change in Dan and Taylor; it's more Inception style without the whole depression. And all three being Simon's jockboys just comes gradually. It's really nice to see a story where the mind control doesn't dominate but comes on gradually and there is an acceptance of the control. And you left room for the story to go in different directions. Thank you for writing this story.

Martin
1/30/24, 6:12 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) The intricacies of time zones :) The system always shows a timestamp adjusted for your local time zone. So I'm always talking MET :)
1/30/24, 5:13 AM
Incredible! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
1/30/24, 4:56 AM
4 stars
1/30/24, 4:25 AM
Loving it!
1/29/24, 1:18 PM
I went back and re read this recently. Such a great series!

Anonymous
1/30/24, 4:20 AM
@[Mrdick](/user/show/1001656) Thank you so much!
1/29/24, 5:47 PM
Aww i feel bad for Jared. I mean im happy that Daniel is now part of the pact but all the drama he brought wirh him is not fun. He is stirring emotions and soon bringing danger. Looking forward for an update again.

Anonymous
1/30/24, 4:19 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thanks a lot! Yeah, it's a bit difficult (It was difficult to write as well) but I promise it will all work out at the end.
1/30/24, 4:15 AM
Such a simultaneously cute and hot af story 😍😍😍 I love it!!
1/30/24, 4:14 AM
Great finale! You're right in your comment to Martin: this ending is pretty clearly signposted, but no less hot for it! The fact that all the jockboys end up being a hivemind at the end is very sexy, and you do a great job showing them absorb Jake's personality during the orgy scene. Too bad I don't know any hot nerds who can mindfuck me into submission.
1/30/24, 2:22 AM
The ending was even better than I dreamed. Glad the time zones allowed this to appear Monday night instead of Tuesday. Yay! And why isn’t this in the running for Mad Science?

1/30/24, 3:34 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I thought about putting this in mad science, but really only the last chapter fits with the contest, imho. And I started posting the story before the contest started. I don’t think you can put a later chapter of a story in a contest, since it wouldn’t be fair for the anonymous judging. Think of this as your Mad Science appetizer before the contest. 😃

1/30/24, 4:04 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Yeah, I get it. But this is one hell of an appetizer ! Just about the best series I’ve read here in a long time.
Dan
1/30/24, 3:35 AM
The Welsh is killing me :joy: Well written, but... Welsh?