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1/28/24, 12:30 PM
The two voices of Charlie work really well - like how the old voice is so much weaker now. A very hot story!
1/28/24, 9:21 AM
What can I say but Wow. You have put so much time and effort into this follow-up and it is so good and horny of course. Look forward to further parts as I love your descriptive style.
1/28/24, 8:39 AM
Love the slow transformation - really well done - Charlie stroking himself and getting into his new life as the chapter ends!
1/28/24, 8:13 AM
Great opening chapter - well constructed plot and characters- Charles’ modified behaviour and feelings are working really well and drawing me in. Ive often fantasised myself about what would it be like for my life to be taken over and totally changed sexually- so I’m going to enjoy reading more.
1/28/24, 6:44 AM
Love this so much.
1/28/24, 6:19 AM
Wow, what a great first entry to the contest! Definitely going to reread this one a ton in the future. Such a hot mind control method, and so hot to read the progression of the transformation. Really great work balancing the two perspectives so well as they mutually change each other, neither aware of the full picture.
1/28/24, 5:28 AM
Oh! Oh! I love this story so far! I love where it's going, and I love your description of Jackson, at the beginning of the story and where he is ended up so far! I've got the perfect Twitter images for him! They're delivering pizza, but I think they'll fit. 😛 https://vxtwitter.com/NijiChara/status/1705884782444355942?s=20 https://vxtwitter.com/NijiChara/status/1703785962818421136?s=20
1/28/24, 4:32 AM
I love this story! So fucking hot and romance. Great work.