Recent Comments

1/28/24, 8:13 AM
Great opening chapter - well constructed plot and characters- Charles’ modified behaviour and feelings are working really well and drawing me in. Ive often fantasised myself about what would it be like for my life to be taken over and totally changed sexually- so I’m going to enjoy reading more.
1/28/24, 6:44 AM
Love this so much.
1/28/24, 6:19 AM
Wow, what a great first entry to the contest! Definitely going to reread this one a ton in the future. Such a hot mind control method, and so hot to read the progression of the transformation. Really great work balancing the two perspectives so well as they mutually change each other, neither aware of the full picture.
1/28/24, 5:28 AM
Oh! Oh! I love this story so far! I love where it's going, and I love your description of Jackson, at the beginning of the story and where he is ended up so far! I've got the perfect Twitter images for him! They're delivering pizza, but I think they'll fit. 😛 https://vxtwitter.com/NijiChara/status/1705884782444355942?s=20 https://vxtwitter.com/NijiChara/status/1703785962818421136?s=20
1/28/24, 4:32 AM
I love this story! So fucking hot and romance. Great work.
1/28/24, 3:41 AM
I’m so excited for some dad and son fun time.
1/28/24, 3:36 AM
Really perfect ! Need more preppy clothe !
Drake
1/28/24, 2:08 AM
Fun read. I had this bizarre plot twist idea running through my head half way through that the end of the story would be a cut away scene to the dad spying on the two boys and laughing at his experiment of "what would happen if my sons forgot they were brothers and one of them forgot he was my son?" Question. All. Reality. lol
1/28/24, 1:09 AM
are there any updates to this story? its so good