Recent Comments

1/27/24, 10:26 AM
Another hot chapter. I hope Bradley and Stellato end up together.
1/27/24, 9:11 AM
Love the series and thanks for the newest chapter! Hope to see more soon and where you take it
1/27/24, 7:48 AM
I enjoyed the story, but... Based on my own attempts at writing these stories, early attempts tend to be a bit bare bones. Some additional description might flesh out the scenes, the characters and their developing relationships. My favorite part of transformation stories is the transformation itself, often embedded within a larger seduction and relationship development. You did some of this, but not enough to get my imagination fired up. Your entire transformation happened in the space of a couple of paragraphs. It alluded to hypnosis and brainwashing, but I thought the description of the process was slim. On top of that the character gained all this muscle growth simply by watching videos. Was there magic involved? I don't pretend to be a good writer, so please don't take me too seriously. Your story writing is better than mine, and real authors will no doubt give you better advice than I can. My best ignorant advice is to keep enjoying the writing and the creative process itself. It fires the imagination. My second best advice is probably to get advice from someone who knows more about writing and the creative process. And again, I did enjoy the story!! I don't read the whole story if I don't like it, or leave comments (stupid or otherwise). Best wishes! And have fun!
R P
1/27/24, 7:38 AM
Damn, what a hot start! Can’t wait to see what the next gift does
1/27/24, 7:24 AM
Yet another great chapter, the dad is totally under the control of his son and soon the rev will be - Excellent
1/27/24, 6:40 AM
I’m hoping this ends with the dad submissive, but will have to wait and see. First story of the new challenge and it’s already amazing.
1/27/24, 5:53 AM
If this doesn't end with both boys submissive to daddy James Keller... Hard to imagine.
1/27/24, 5:10 AM
The type of story I like. What captivated me most wasn't even the beginning, which is a very well executed cliché, but the final stretch surprised me. I didn't expect this to happen so soon. I mean, I knew there weren't going to be any sex scenes because we were warned, but I thought the part would just be Rodney being used and subtly reprogrammed to be the hot, rich best friend a gay nerd could want. I like the potential dynamic that promises to be created, I'm already waiting for part 2.
1/27/24, 3:57 AM
Excellent John
1/27/24, 3:41 AM
Oh my oh my oh my! Fans head. Sooo sexy. So hot. Wow. Nerdy dom top and subby jock bottom. Loved it and the rimming. So good! Such a hot set up. Also the idea of the son dominating his father is hot too. I hope that stays true. Such a sexy story!