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1/24/24, 5:10 PM
Part three was better than I'd anticipated. I love the slow process of how you're descibing Ace's and Kris' conversion of straight boy Tommy

1/25/24, 7:18 PM
@[Yorksbiker08](/user/show/1049586) Glad to hear it :grin:

1/25/24, 10:11 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) tell me there’s a fourth installment 🙏

1/25/24, 10:48 PM
@[Yorksbiker08](/user/show/1049586) For now I have 3 more chapters, but I need to revise and improve some things. I'll upload them soon :stuck_out_tongue:
Martin
1/25/24, 10:23 PM
To enclose the tale of J's journey into those hot descriptions how it's ended up being your perfect toy is really great. Please continue!

1/25/24, 10:39 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you! And don't worry, there are a few more stories down the line! I hope you enjoy those too :)
Martin
1/25/24, 10:13 PM
What an amazing start! I love how you switch to "it" at the end... To be your toy for just once...

1/25/24, 10:38 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Ah well, you'll see it more throughout the series! When I'm talking about J, I use he/him. When about the toy, I use it.
Martin
1/25/24, 10:18 PM
Love it! Such a good toy. I envy it!
Martin
1/25/24, 9:37 PM
@JockTopper: Due to a bug, we can't approve your edit. I'll try to fix it this weekend. The actual issue is that your current series is included in a curated list, and because of that, it cannot be deleted (to be replaced by the new series).

Martin
1/25/24, 9:41 PM
Actually, I've just fixed it. The core issue was that you named the series for each chapter individually. If you want to create a series with multiple chapters, all chapters have to use the same ***series*** name - but different ***story*** names. Let me know if you have questions about this!
1/25/24, 9:28 PM
please continue!!
Martin
1/22/24, 6:58 AM
Just a little remark from the site's owner: The site's rules contain a clause that there must be no realistic rape scenario and that includes the usage of real-life drugs. This first chapter seems to use some kind of knock-out drug. You need to add some total non-realistic touch to the follow-up chapters please!

1/22/24, 8:46 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I agree with you. As much as it is a great start to the story, not very keen on the fact a guy was drugged and taken out of a place without anyone even knowing.

1/22/24, 1:32 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) To get a little clarification, what is the difference with the start of this compared to a very popular story on this site Fall of the Parker Brothers. That story is all about drugs and rape and features no hypnosis.

Martin
1/22/24, 2:46 PM
@[Hypnofiend23](/user/show/2528896) It is a fine line, and yes, I've struggled with some of Jack's stories. As I see it, the drug in Jack's stories makes the boys extremely horny, submissive, uninhibited, and gay, but they have no other adverse effects. It's not described as realistic a drug like GHB or heroine. The 'realistic' part is the important point. The simple reason why this rule exists in the first place is to avoid people getting the wrong idea and try to play out this fantasy in real life. If you say that this is a bit hypocritical, I don't really deny it. It's a bit of a fig leaf for me, but a small price to pay.

1/22/24, 3:53 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks for the warning, if my work is in violation of the site's rules I can remove it or edit it to make the drugging part far less realistic. l already have the entirety of the story written out and this is the only time something like this happens, the rest is mostly mind control via bodily odors.

Martin
1/22/24, 4:08 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) No need to remove the story. It's perfectly ok to make this drug a bit less realistic. Like it doesn't knock him out but makes him very susceptible to the suggestions so he follows them on his own account. I'm sure you'll come up with something. Or maybe you make him sniff their odor which arouses him so he just wants to follow them. Mind control via bodily odors is perfectly fine!

1/22/24, 7:25 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I've removed the substance element all together, I hope this would be more acceptable.

Martin
1/22/24, 7:56 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) :thumbsup:

1/22/24, 8:09 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Awesome, thanks for all the feedback! :grin:

1/25/24, 7:16 AM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) I think the change fo squezzing sweat I go his drink is very hot and in keeping with parts two and three 🥵🥵🥵🥵

1/25/24, 7:15 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) That's a relief, honestly I was afraid it'd be a bit out of place :sweat_smile:
1/25/24, 6:15 PM
This is a great concept, looking forward to the next entry!
1/25/24, 5:35 PM
Perfectly well written, the build up is great
1/25/24, 5:21 PM
As always, I love your transformation stories, and this one is certainly no exception!