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1/25/24, 9:28 PM
please continue!!
Martin
1/22/24, 6:58 AM
Just a little remark from the site's owner: The site's rules contain a clause that there must be no realistic rape scenario and that includes the usage of real-life drugs. This first chapter seems to use some kind of knock-out drug. You need to add some total non-realistic touch to the follow-up chapters please!

1/22/24, 8:46 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I agree with you. As much as it is a great start to the story, not very keen on the fact a guy was drugged and taken out of a place without anyone even knowing.

1/22/24, 1:32 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) To get a little clarification, what is the difference with the start of this compared to a very popular story on this site Fall of the Parker Brothers. That story is all about drugs and rape and features no hypnosis.

Martin
1/22/24, 2:46 PM
@[Hypnofiend23](/user/show/2528896) It is a fine line, and yes, I've struggled with some of Jack's stories. As I see it, the drug in Jack's stories makes the boys extremely horny, submissive, uninhibited, and gay, but they have no other adverse effects. It's not described as realistic a drug like GHB or heroine. The 'realistic' part is the important point. The simple reason why this rule exists in the first place is to avoid people getting the wrong idea and try to play out this fantasy in real life. If you say that this is a bit hypocritical, I don't really deny it. It's a bit of a fig leaf for me, but a small price to pay.

1/22/24, 3:53 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks for the warning, if my work is in violation of the site's rules I can remove it or edit it to make the drugging part far less realistic. l already have the entirety of the story written out and this is the only time something like this happens, the rest is mostly mind control via bodily odors.

Martin
1/22/24, 4:08 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) No need to remove the story. It's perfectly ok to make this drug a bit less realistic. Like it doesn't knock him out but makes him very susceptible to the suggestions so he follows them on his own account. I'm sure you'll come up with something. Or maybe you make him sniff their odor which arouses him so he just wants to follow them. Mind control via bodily odors is perfectly fine!

1/22/24, 7:25 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I've removed the substance element all together, I hope this would be more acceptable.

Martin
1/22/24, 7:56 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) :thumbsup:

1/22/24, 8:09 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Awesome, thanks for all the feedback! :grin:

1/25/24, 7:16 AM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) I think the change fo squezzing sweat I go his drink is very hot and in keeping with parts two and three 🥵🥵🥵🥵

1/25/24, 7:15 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) That's a relief, honestly I was afraid it'd be a bit out of place :sweat_smile:
1/25/24, 6:15 PM
This is a great concept, looking forward to the next entry!
1/25/24, 5:35 PM
Perfectly well written, the build up is great
1/25/24, 5:21 PM
As always, I love your transformation stories, and this one is certainly no exception!
1/25/24, 4:47 PM
I love your experiences u sound dominant would you be able to hypnotize a guy online very submissive but strong willed don't believe I can be put under tried with spirals and hour long recording listening to them going to bed
HypnoFreak
1/25/24, 11:30 AM
This is that type of story where before you are fully satisfied, it ends, leaving you with a semi-hard and aching eyes for more of it with your mind cursing : Why was it so short?!

1/25/24, 2:43 PM
@[HypnoFreak](/user/show/10043513) Thanks! But don't worry, there are more chapters, so you don't have to torture yourself staying just semi-hard
sporthawk
1/25/24, 2:34 PM
After the story disappeared I was beginning to think I made it up specially because I couldn't find any trace of it. Glad to see it's back!
1/25/24, 1:07 PM
You have such a unique way of writing what I want to read and then rather than stop at one transformation you give us continued mpb, obese gents (slobs) bigger and better than before. So glad you are continuing this piece.

1/25/24, 2:05 PM
@[Titan](/user/show/17556) Thanks so much! Some of your stories were foundational to my interests. While the next story I've been working on splits off of my main core fetishes in a different direction than this, I've got some stories that I've been ruminating on that focus more intently on the balding obese gentlemanly aspects that I hope you enjoy (in addition to some more on this story down the line).
1/25/24, 9:00 AM
I love the general idea of an interracial/class body swap. The pace of the story was good. It was hot the way Pablo ended up as Alex's darker skinned boyfriend who had trouble speaking English. What was really missing for me it any sense of how the transformation was done.