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Anonymous
1/25/24, 4:57 AM
I have been looking for your stories for so longggg so glad to see you’re back
1/25/24, 3:54 AM
My checking back finally paid off! Loved this chapter, of course. It took a few satisfying sessions to complete it. Life happens and breaks are understood, but I hope you keep writing (preferably before 3 more years). Love that this father and son were put through this, know what's happening, but can't do anything about it! Great work.

1/25/24, 4:52 AM
@[HusbandFirst](/user/show/2436468) Thanks so much for your continued support! Glad to know that I managed to interrupt your reading...:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: I do still have some other ideas in mind for other stories, but creative writing is a time and brain power consuming effort. I'll definitely try my best to keep it going, we'll see how it goes. Thanks.
1/25/24, 12:10 AM
It wonderful and great things to see you add another chapter. I like the part how they punishment them. And just control their body and crave but still remain their personal. It little bit sad the story is end. I thought their would be a part like make them list some man or boy to force them join club than the end. Anyway it good to see you write more! Very thankful.

1/25/24, 4:43 AM
@[easterblue229](/user/show/920853) Thanks! Unfortunately I don't feel like I have any more interesting new inspirations to bring to this series at this point. I have covered the operations of the Club and how the servants got enslaved into working for the Club. I guess I could go on some more about the Club's activities or how Ron or Chris might be made to go about recruiting more innocent men. But I feel like I don't have any new ideas to present these in a different and interesting way, so I'd end up just repeating the similar plots that I've already written about. So I think it might be best to just wrap it up nicely. But thanks for your support and comment anyway!
1/25/24, 4:36 AM
Wow, the way you describe things is amazing, the phrases you use and the obvious experience behind your storytelling is clear! I feel like you take me on a journey and you plan how I’ll end up… just like the top in the story leads his new devotee where he wants him to end up, and what he experiences along the way! Damn! One question that confused me, is this part two of JT seducing Coach Murphy, or JT seducing a new Coach (Johnson)? Thank you for writing and taking me on an exciting journey! Damn I want to meet you and see who you are in person! Wow
1/25/24, 3:26 AM
Good story, well written and enjoyable like all of your stuff that I've read. I did find it interesting you chose to use Welsh as the alien language.
Anonymous
1/25/24, 2:59 AM
I love how you’re detailing Monty’s inner idlings and his slowly increasing want to covet his friend. Also, I am enjoying the resilience Justin has, compared to your other JPS-afflicted characters. Don’t get me wrong, I love the slutty ones who cave the instant they see big cock, but the ones with a bit more self control are a nice change of pace. It’s also very satisfying to see them crumble eventually lol
1/25/24, 2:52 AM
I love the melding of the power exchange and the romance. The pace of Baby's transformation seems almost unnaturally quick and smooth, without self-doubt, which hints of the power of the subtle hypnosis sessions. The seduction feels both somewhat insidious and yet seemingly harmless and romantic. This small lack of clarity just as insidiously keeps the reader moving through the story as fast as one can absorb the hot interaction. Speaking of which, no time to say thanks. i gotta go!
1/25/24, 1:07 AM
Glad you continued writing this series! Have been looking forward for more chapters.
1/24/24, 11:28 PM
This is so good.
10/7/23, 12:58 AM
Is it bad I kinda want Booker to escape!? He was so hot in this story and the one before this. He could probably use his science to completely reverse his condition and get that massive dick back!!!!

1/24/24, 11:27 PM
@[Jjoday018](/user/show/10001108) Yes! Very bad! How many times can I have this man escape to wreak havoc on some other men?! XD