Recent Comments

1/22/24, 11:50 AM
Love the story so far and hope to see more
1/22/24, 11:39 AM
Great beginning. I hope you can keep the story going on account of rules
1/22/24, 10:49 AM
did yo sometime go more into hypno / brainwash until mindless drone ? Clay and jeff need to be turn into mindless drone ... in 3th part (if yo still writting)
1/22/24, 8:23 AM
Pleaae continue!
eagerboy415
1/22/24, 7:43 AM
Well done! Loved reading it!!!
1/22/24, 7:35 AM
Great start - looking forward to the next chapter.
1/22/24, 7:18 AM
A brilliant third chapter. Superb writing - I feel as though I'm in Daddy's dungeon too. Can't wait to see if there is another chapter to the story.
1/22/24, 6:30 AM
Nice start. Look forward to more.
1/22/24, 12:22 AM
Bookmarked this story a while ago to finish it when I had time, and damn its hot. I love the reality-shifting obliviousness and how the frat boy is pulled in with his arrogance and then enjoyment. Great story.

1/22/24, 6:21 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Oh yeah, figuring out how to draw the frat boy in was one of my favourite parts of the process, even though I was really worried it wouldn’t work, lol. I’m glad you found it hot! Thanks for reading, I’m happy you saw what I was doing.
1/11/24, 12:21 AM
As always Soren, another great story that breaths life and character into your world that you have beautifully crafted! How you wrote such a fun and lighthearted, yet incredibly precise and sexy, story based off a single gif is beyond me, I continue to be envious of your writing abilities! Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what else you have planned!

1/22/24, 6:18 AM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) I’m still shocked that I was able to get all this out of one GIF at all. I knew I had to write _something_, or else I’d die, but what? Took a lot of brainstorming to get to this point. But as long as I captured the essential hotness and vibe of the source material, I’m happy. Thanks for reading!!