Recent Comments

Jake
1/20/24, 5:57 AM
please more. i love this kind of story.
1/20/24, 5:53 AM
Hi. Just wanna say I don't think I can release the next chapter this Sunday. I'm apparently having a writer's block. I'll write when inspiration strikes. :satisfied:
1/20/24, 4:55 AM
Didn't expect to see the next leg of the story so soon, but enjoyed seeing the relationship between Jake and Simon grow further. Like @Fred W. Kong said, the balance between the erotic and romantic parts of this story is really enjoyable and makes the whole story enjoyable. I am really looking forward to seeing how the Neurolink will change the dynamic between Jake and SImon as well as how Jake's friends will be brought into the mix. This sotry has me thinking about the D/s relationship and how the emotional side of the master/slave realtionship can interact.
Anonymous
1/19/24, 11:45 PM
loved this story! do you think you could write a rubber story?

1/20/24, 3:35 AM
@Anonymous One story you might like to check is THE BUMSUIT by jasereraser, on Deviant Art. If you do a search for that author, write deviantart as one word. (Any rubber stories I did would probably have been on that site, but everything got deleted when they banned me. I'll keep the idea of doing a new one here on GSS in mind. THANKS.)
Willie Cici
1/20/24, 2:11 AM
You have to tell us what happens during the summer. Can leave us "hanging".
1/20/24, 2:01 AM
Very hot! Definitely dark but it pushes buttons. I agree though you put so much great writing into the initial struggle and it would have been nice to see Elliot breaking but hot none the less.
Anonymous
1/20/24, 1:44 AM
Please continue this.
1/20/24, 12:25 AM
Made my day today.
1/19/24, 10:48 PM
You could have saved this concept and sold it to an erotica publisher. Like, conventional publishing. They do plenty of mc. (I mean this as possibly one of the greatest compliments I can give) You do an incredible job of balancing the erotic and romantic elements of this story. Even when sex isn't happening, I'm enjoying the characters and how they move around each other. Listening to Jake's internal monologue really adds a ton to the sex scenes, and his introduction to D/s and kink play feels very, very realistic. This story is already one of the greats, Simon and Jake are going to be living in my head for a long time coming.
1/19/24, 10:44 PM
This was hot. Also I like the "pretend things are normal" element. No life ruining, just pleasure. But yeah younger guy dom top, older guy subby bottom. So hot. Also I enjoyed the mix of povs. Super great!