Recent Comments

1/20/24, 2:01 AM
Very hot! Definitely dark but it pushes buttons. I agree though you put so much great writing into the initial struggle and it would have been nice to see Elliot breaking but hot none the less.
Anonymous
1/20/24, 1:44 AM
Please continue this.
1/20/24, 12:25 AM
Made my day today.
1/19/24, 10:48 PM
You could have saved this concept and sold it to an erotica publisher. Like, conventional publishing. They do plenty of mc. (I mean this as possibly one of the greatest compliments I can give) You do an incredible job of balancing the erotic and romantic elements of this story. Even when sex isn't happening, I'm enjoying the characters and how they move around each other. Listening to Jake's internal monologue really adds a ton to the sex scenes, and his introduction to D/s and kink play feels very, very realistic. This story is already one of the greats, Simon and Jake are going to be living in my head for a long time coming.
1/19/24, 10:44 PM
This was hot. Also I like the "pretend things are normal" element. No life ruining, just pleasure. But yeah younger guy dom top, older guy subby bottom. So hot. Also I enjoyed the mix of povs. Super great!
Martin
1/19/24, 10:26 PM
Love it! Nothing better than to cum your brains out...
1/19/24, 9:32 PM
You should definitely continue this.
Lee
1/19/24, 7:38 PM
This is one hot series, becoming my favorite! Hope to see this story continue! It's fun to see other species come out from this virus goatmen and horsemen would be HOT, but even as it is gets my juices flowing! Please continue this series!
Anonymous
1/19/24, 7:17 PM
Would be interesting if some gym would become Musky Muslim Arabs Muslim brothers are almost never alone in the gym
1/19/24, 5:25 PM
I looove this story. Too few stories are from the point of view of a cocky muscular alpha. Please continue for as long as you want!

1/19/24, 6:58 PM
@[Floridaboi](/user/show/10001705) Thanks buddy. More chapters to come.