Recent Comments

6/2/25, 5:01 PM
Fuck I love this story. So entertaining and dirty. Very well written too. I hope there’s more stories about this gumshoe to read after I finish this one. Thanks for sharing it on this site. 😍
6/2/25, 9:54 AM
I hope there is more.
6/2/25, 9:46 AM
Now the original Chase becomes the Coach?
HypnoFreak
6/2/25, 9:40 AM
I don't really like the villain wins stories, spoils my mood to be honest. I actually did not really read the last chapter. Yeah, I know that's wrong but I didn't want to be frowning at the end so I just read the comments to see what the end was and even reading those and knowing that Blaine took over James. And thinking about it a little more, it doesn't work the logic that a psyche student was able to take over a hypnotherapist. I would love to collab and maybe write an alternative ending.
Pj
6/2/25, 3:26 AM
Would love this to happen to me
6/2/25, 2:31 AM
Awesome story just in time for summer!
6/1/25, 4:47 PM
Awww I was hopeful that Markus would dominate him. Sad on this. That said assplay is fun!

6/2/25, 2:21 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Hey, keep hoping. We've still got a few more chapters to go👀
6/2/25, 12:14 AM
So, grin, when's the chapter that is like "I rimmed my straight friend's hole for content" and "I fucked and bred my straight friend for views" hehe There being ass is fun, and the slow and steady actions here is fun.

6/2/25, 1:40 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you brother. Here's what to expect. Next Part: My Throat, His Rules - The Countdown Game (Deepthroat Game) After that: My straight gym bro asked me to tongue his hole and fuck him on camera Give you both of these together. Hope you like it brother.

6/2/25, 1:54 AM
@[DanXWrites](/user/show/10062452) Oooh nice! That sounds super fun. Looking forward to the rimming and the fucking. Sounds awesome. (So I will admit that my happy end is "My straight gym bro is now my good boy!" cause I like gay dom (top) and subby once straight boy. But I figure you have a different ending planned. hehe) Seriously though cool stuff. Interesting progression. Also the baby steps of how things develop is fun to read.

6/2/25, 1:57 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you bro. I definitely want to explore a lot more in this. Don't want to keep Brad as the Alpha dom. Instead, have him submit from time to time. I don't have any ending planned. I have written a couple of parts after this. Different scenarios, roleplay, scenes, etc. Just making sure that every part is hotter than the one before. Thanks for reading man!
Anonymous
6/2/25, 12:46 AM
What a killer beginning to the series! I can’t wait for the next chapter!
6/2/25, 12:10 AM
Bravo! I like how the narrator Pat’s werewolf qualities come out - the sense of smell, most of all. I LOVED when Pat realizes he’s tracking the daddies by scent, instinctually and not consciously at first. That was very well done, and a very clever way of showing the wolf side of him is taking over his nature, not just his physical appearance. I’ve never read someone writing about tracking by scent in such a good manner. Bravo! I also like how you’re indicating all the camp ground residents are ‘in-the-know’ and making comments to one another that give clues to the narrator (and the reader) about the world we’re entering. It makes me wonder who’s all wolf, who’s mortal but in-the-know, and who’s a hapless camper. I’m also curious to see if all remains hunky-dory-let’s-fuck, or if there a dark side to the camp as well. Continue! Continue!