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6/2/25, 12:10 AM
Bravo! I like how the narrator Pat’s werewolf qualities come out - the sense of smell, most of all. I LOVED when Pat realizes he’s tracking the daddies by scent, instinctually and not consciously at first. That was very well done, and a very clever way of showing the wolf side of him is taking over his nature, not just his physical appearance. I’ve never read someone writing about tracking by scent in such a good manner. Bravo! I also like how you’re indicating all the camp ground residents are ‘in-the-know’ and making comments to one another that give clues to the narrator (and the reader) about the world we’re entering. It makes me wonder who’s all wolf, who’s mortal but in-the-know, and who’s a hapless camper. I’m also curious to see if all remains hunky-dory-let’s-fuck, or if there a dark side to the camp as well. Continue! Continue!
6/2/25, 12:08 AM
Fun story. I really like that the gloves themselves were disgusted by Simon, despite him being the person they were supposed to serve, and going "OK, let's fix this." Made things feel much more "even".
Leatherpierced
6/1/25, 10:17 PM
Damn all that metal and shit must be nice - constantly hard reading it - I got to have that
6/1/25, 10:08 PM
I love demon/devil stories like this, and this one was no disappointment!
Steve
6/1/25, 9:24 PM
I wait this part, bro. Little fast but great compact develppment in the history. Good luck vro.
PSQueer
6/1/25, 3:56 PM
Another extremely hot chapter, please give us more! 🥵 🔒
DomTopSkin
6/1/25, 3:31 PM
Great story. Keep em coming lad.
6/1/25, 3:01 PM
Interesting start. Curious to see where it goes.

Anonymous
6/1/25, 3:02 PM
@Jonanator Dont expect much its something i wrote in the spur of the moment and imagination its a little messy and inconsistent hahahaha sometimes its all over the place but meh hahahahahaha
Jaques
6/1/25, 1:35 PM
Excellent storytelling. Keep it up.

6/1/25, 1:58 PM
@Jaques Thanks so much!
Anonymous
6/1/25, 1:57 PM
Will you post chapter 2 here too?