Recent Comments

1/14/24, 4:40 AM
@Edlam please continue!!
Anonymous
1/14/24, 3:56 AM
LOVE THIS! I hope we get some snippets of his life in the future. Will you continue on?
Ozplays
1/14/24, 12:25 AM
Great story. Nice to see a power bottom's perspective.
1/13/24, 11:55 PM
Young the master and a dilf as a sub/victim, I love it
abc123
1/13/24, 11:54 PM
love where this is going!
1/13/24, 9:31 PM
Any time I see that you've posted, I instantly open the story, grab my dick, and let your words take me away!
Martin
1/13/24, 9:10 PM
Interesting start! Looking forward to where this is leading!
EntrancedGay92
1/13/24, 9:08 PM
A nice twist on a favorite trope.
1/12/24, 10:23 PM
Hey there! Very much a first attempt at actually contributing to the site after using it for years. Friendly feedback appreciated :grinning:

1/13/24, 9:06 AM
@CorvidCorpus Hi, and congrats on your first story! I thought it was a great addition to the stage show stories we have here! It was interesting that the audience was also hypnotized as well, I think that could have potential in a future story. I liked the hypnotist’s sadistic bent, and hope that we might get more of this character. The small scenes of the suggestions you illustrated and the cold open paint a really tantalizing picture of the kind of show they got into, I think you could write something really great by exploring the inductions/buildup to the show and more of the suggestions. I went ahead and added this to my list of mass hypnosis stories: it perfectly hit my tastes, good job! Hope to see more from you

1/13/24, 9:01 PM
@[11037](/user/show/13616) Thank you! Would definitely like to continue it though I have no specific ideas of where to go from here. I figure the set-up here lends itself to vignettes in basically any scenario haha. Definitely see the point about inductions and such, not my forté but something to certainly take a shot at next time. I've always enjoyed seeing the more callous/sadistic side of stage hypno and keen to explore it further when I get the time!
1/13/24, 6:05 PM
Would love to see more of this!!