Recent Comments

1/12/24, 2:46 PM
I LOVE this story of Jack and Joe. You have so effectively described him and his personality, that I can feel this man. Such a great writer.
1/12/24, 2:42 PM
More please want to see what happens next
1/12/24, 2:26 PM
I LOVE LOVE this story. THANK YOU.
1/12/24, 1:31 PM
I can’t wait for the next part!

1/12/24, 2:17 PM
@[Hypnocurious](/user/show/1798860) Thanks! I'll try to be fast 😁
Anonymous
1/11/24, 3:30 AM
Great story, enjoyed it a lot. I hope the main character gets to at some point. I would like to see Dane get topped by him or maybe a cute nerd or teacher.

1/12/24, 1:51 PM
@Anonymous Hey, hey! Thanks for the comment. (SPOILER) but yeah, definetly have plans for Jace to do that as well. He'll be very subby in the beggining, but do already have plans for 4th or 5th chapter, depending how long the scenes before will take. His dom/sub, top/bot preferences will largly depend on the specific person he's having sex with, but even then it can change as their relationship grows.
AgentCoyner
1/10/24, 10:40 PM
As requested, letting you know I came to this story~ Excited to see more and hoping Jace gets his shot with Dane!

1/12/24, 1:44 PM
@[AgentCoyner](/user/show/10008527) Thank you! Hope to keep hitting the right notes for you and for many more explosive reading ahead. <3
1/9/24, 3:33 AM
A day late, but just wanted to take the time to commend you for writing an effortful first submission! The juxtaposition between Jace's stepfather and Coach was a nice contrast and I'm looking forward to seeing how Jace's relationships develop - particularly between Coach and Dane. I would heed Soren's advise about the separation of dialogue between paragraphs, as you did a masterful job writing it and it would be a shame if it got lost in the reading. Keep writing and I can't wait to see more!

1/12/24, 1:41 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thanks! I'm also most excited about developing these specific relationships, between Jace with Coach and his stepfather. Wanted for him to have a diferent dynamic with each other character, so they truly feel different and wanted to have both extremes. There's gonna be more exposition and worldbuilding in the next two chapters, so then it will be a bit more clear where each path is going. Stay tuned!
1/12/24, 2:21 AM
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Anonymous
1/12/24, 1:06 PM
@[Palladium](/user/show/10033545) Rewards! 😍
Hinner
1/11/24, 9:14 PM
ID 1191188 I really like all the new stuff, especially the labyrinth! The events and the guys are so hot! I just wish getting a mythical was a little bit easier and didn't require thousands of battles even when shards are plenty available...

Anonymous
1/12/24, 1:06 PM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) Rewards! :heart_eyes:
1/12/24, 12:20 PM
I agree with felix.nox : the ending just confirmed the rest of the story. All chapters are unethical, not just the last. The bad guy won, yes. It doesn't mean the story is badly written or uninteresting or not exciting. I liked this story, it gave good material for masturbation, it was hot.