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1/12/24, 11:56 AM
Super super hot!
1/12/24, 6:54 AM
It took me a while to get into the characters of this story. I'm not certain that I ever did, but the writing grew stronger with each chapter. For a first post, this is a great one. I'd like to read more from you, DomNerd. Thanks for an unexpected New Year's gift.
1/12/24, 1:23 AM
That was so good! I love the concept of that game. I just wish the game went on longer and involved more magic, personalities, professions, etc. I hope that's not the last we hear of Owen Howland!

1/12/24, 6:24 AM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Hahaha you wish I had gone on longer; I kept trying to get to the end! I thought it would be a fun new years short story and it ended up pushing 10,000 words! That said, I’ve left it open for more Owen Howland shenanigans :wink:
Anonymous
1/11/24, 10:01 PM
Excited to read more of your stories. All of them have been wonderful so far.

1/12/24, 6:21 AM
@Anonymous Thank you!! There are many more to come!
1/12/24, 12:12 AM
This was absolutely amazing. Fantastic idea, fun magic, great characters. Thanks so much!

1/12/24, 4:52 AM
Thank you @[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) :) I can never decide if I like this one or not, but I'm certainly glad you did!

1/12/24, 4:56 AM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) It's so original and well-written, it's hard not to love!

1/12/24, 6:20 AM
:heartbeat:
1/11/24, 3:49 AM
Loooove games as a cause of transformations and mind changes, and this one did that reeeally well!! Nice story!!

1/12/24, 6:20 AM
@[klaraklao](/user/show/10000318) Thank you! I love that you love it! :slightly_smiling_face:
1/12/24, 3:28 AM
This was so good. I felt a frisson of fear when the haunting was first introduced, and then I felt real pity for literally everyone involved, even while it was sexy as hell. Love coming across these years-old gems, and in this case it was because of the highlighted stories on GSS by topic!

1/12/24, 4:52 AM
Thanks @[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419)! This was actually one of the first stories I ever wrote, but when the Supernatural contest came up I decided to pull it and enter it there. I'm proud of this one.
1/12/24, 4:35 AM
I love hypnosis as a means of transforming a boy's thinking, and I love the way you worded your training session. Normally I like longer stories, which for me seem a more realistic timeframe for achieving a deep level of hypnosis and control. The way you framed this one session as part of a series of sessions required to achieve this level of influence worked well. Thanks for a very enjoyable story!
1/12/24, 1:09 AM
Hehe, I am back. With a new story, as the last one even though I have a plot for it, I just don't know how to write it. So I decided to write a new story, maybe it will give me inspiration to get back to Atlantic Beasts. This series will follow an example of one of my favourite writers here @Tha Avnanizeis he is an amazing writer and I love all of his stories. Last year he wrote a chapter per day, without editing as it comes. I am not that good, so I will write whenever I have time. But it will be also without editing too much as it was the editing that slowed my progress with AB. I hope you like this series, this one is inspired by a lot of novels I read, so in my opinion it will be spicy, but maybe I have mild taste for most of you. we shall see. Stay safe Iriefall.
Male-meat-suit
1/12/24, 12:36 AM
Oh my god, what a great story. When will you upload the next part?