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1/12/24, 12:20 PM
I agree with felix.nox : the ending just confirmed the rest of the story. All chapters are unethical, not just the last. The bad guy won, yes. It doesn't mean the story is badly written or uninteresting or not exciting. I liked this story, it gave good material for masturbation, it was hot.
1/12/24, 11:56 AM
Super super hot!
1/12/24, 6:54 AM
It took me a while to get into the characters of this story. I'm not certain that I ever did, but the writing grew stronger with each chapter. For a first post, this is a great one. I'd like to read more from you, DomNerd. Thanks for an unexpected New Year's gift.
1/12/24, 1:23 AM
That was so good! I love the concept of that game. I just wish the game went on longer and involved more magic, personalities, professions, etc. I hope that's not the last we hear of Owen Howland!

1/12/24, 6:24 AM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Hahaha you wish I had gone on longer; I kept trying to get to the end! I thought it would be a fun new years short story and it ended up pushing 10,000 words! That said, I’ve left it open for more Owen Howland shenanigans :wink:
Anonymous
1/11/24, 10:01 PM
Excited to read more of your stories. All of them have been wonderful so far.

1/12/24, 6:21 AM
@Anonymous Thank you!! There are many more to come!
1/12/24, 12:12 AM
This was absolutely amazing. Fantastic idea, fun magic, great characters. Thanks so much!

1/12/24, 4:52 AM
Thank you @[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) :) I can never decide if I like this one or not, but I'm certainly glad you did!

1/12/24, 4:56 AM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) It's so original and well-written, it's hard not to love!

1/12/24, 6:20 AM
:heartbeat:
1/11/24, 3:49 AM
Loooove games as a cause of transformations and mind changes, and this one did that reeeally well!! Nice story!!

1/12/24, 6:20 AM
@[klaraklao](/user/show/10000318) Thank you! I love that you love it! :slightly_smiling_face:
1/12/24, 3:28 AM
This was so good. I felt a frisson of fear when the haunting was first introduced, and then I felt real pity for literally everyone involved, even while it was sexy as hell. Love coming across these years-old gems, and in this case it was because of the highlighted stories on GSS by topic!

1/12/24, 4:52 AM
Thanks @[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419)! This was actually one of the first stories I ever wrote, but when the Supernatural contest came up I decided to pull it and enter it there. I'm proud of this one.
1/12/24, 4:35 AM
I love hypnosis as a means of transforming a boy's thinking, and I love the way you worded your training session. Normally I like longer stories, which for me seem a more realistic timeframe for achieving a deep level of hypnosis and control. The way you framed this one session as part of a series of sessions required to achieve this level of influence worked well. Thanks for a very enjoyable story!
1/12/24, 1:09 AM
Hehe, I am back. With a new story, as the last one even though I have a plot for it, I just don't know how to write it. So I decided to write a new story, maybe it will give me inspiration to get back to Atlantic Beasts. This series will follow an example of one of my favourite writers here @Tha Avnanizeis he is an amazing writer and I love all of his stories. Last year he wrote a chapter per day, without editing as it comes. I am not that good, so I will write whenever I have time. But it will be also without editing too much as it was the editing that slowed my progress with AB. I hope you like this series, this one is inspired by a lot of novels I read, so in my opinion it will be spicy, but maybe I have mild taste for most of you. we shall see. Stay safe Iriefall.