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Anonymous
1/9/24, 10:44 AM
Man, its 2024 already. You finished chapter14 yets?
Zander
1/9/24, 10:42 AM
Thank you for the story. I have been waiting for a long time for someone to write something like this. I hope the continuation of the story will not be long in coming and we will see many chapters.
1/9/24, 7:21 AM
This was hot and made me realize how much I missed these stories.
1/8/24, 10:56 PM
Fun and interesting story. Can't wait to see how it goes. Reminds me of a story on here where mc does his best not to fall for any of the hypnosis stuff.

1/9/24, 6:56 AM
@Flamefox23 I'm really inspired by my favorite authors here: Elmara (my ultimate favorite smut author in the site), Willie Cici (mostly his earlier stories centered around twunky bottoms protagonists), Nocturne13, Rotherhaman's 'Born to be Bred' series, Adonis' 'Lust's #1 Gamer' series, z119z, and gymmuscle's 'The Change' series They write really great stories here and I think I draw a LOT of inspiration from them Thank you for you kind reply :)
Lavender Lad
1/8/24, 8:04 PM
I didn't like how too many words were just dedicated to the pov character going "hmm I saw this in my favorite gay hypno smut before" to the point of redundancy instead of using his knowledge of being in a story to his advantage, it really takes you out of the action. other than that I am really liking the idea and looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully many fluff scenes between Brad and Tony!

1/9/24, 6:46 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Fluffy, yes, but after lots of build-up And yes, the exposition of my MC is a bit jarring but I'm unironically trying to emulate light novels (at least the trashy ones) and self-insert fics. But I hope I'm gonna improve on this because plot is gonna happen next Thank you for the constructive critique :)
Zander
1/7/24, 9:39 PM
It's a great story, but for some reason the pictures don't open.

Willie Cici
1/8/24, 3:55 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) I wrote this story months ago. By the time I posted the stories, Tumbler removed them. Sorry about. I'll edit them out.

Martin
1/8/24, 5:40 AM
@Willie Cici Why don't you upload them to our server and directly embed#d them directly into your stories? Then you're not depending on external servers for the images.

Willie CIci
1/9/24, 3:06 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I have to learn how to do that. Thanks.

Martin
1/9/24, 6:20 AM
@Willie CIci Let me know if you want assistance. I'm always here to help. Also, right above the text editor in the story submission dialog, there is a link called "Adding images to your story", which explains the process.
1/9/24, 1:45 AM
This was really hot! Thank you so much for sharing this with us <3

1/9/24, 5:45 AM
@[timpu713](/user/show/10045954) Thanks. It was fun to write. And sharing is fun.
offeringservice26
1/9/24, 3:59 AM
Thank you for one of the best and hottest stories I’ve ever read on this site or anywhere else! I have a few stray, not particularly organized thoughts that address the other comments more than the story itself. I hope you’re not feeling deflated by any of the comments regarding the way it ends. I personally enjoyed it quite a lot. And I hope you’ll note that not one of them criticizes your writing in the least, which remains thoroughly impeccable. Perhaps it would be a bit more palatable to the detractors if viewed through the lens of an epilogue rather than a last chapter. If one accepts the presuppositions of the story (that this type of profound behavior-changing hypnosis is real, that someone like Alex might actually exist, etc.) then this conclusion is the logical outcome of the story. Alex suddenly developing true romantic feelings towards Tommy and freeing him from his mental control isn’t the real Alex, it’s a new character instead. Tommy being released from his hypnosis and embracing a “new Tommy” that’s a natural pussyboy negates the premise of hypnotic control. And on and on. In a sense the reactions of people who wanted a “good” ending reminds me of the mentality of all the flakes that pervade sites like Recon. They sit around masturbating to chats about being a “slave” or TPE but as soon as the discussion starts veering towards serious consequences of those arrangements (unconditional relocation, fianancial transfers, occupational changes, various social isolations, on and on) — poof! Suddenly the masturbators are gone, never to be heard from again. Deep down they just want the fantasy, not the reality which might have genuinely unpleasant consequences. Ok, I’ll wrap up this rant. I hope no one feels overly attacked reading this, this is just my personal perspective on the way the story ended. Fantastic story from A to Z bud. Truly an all-time great.
1/9/24, 2:16 AM
that was a very satisfying read, i couldn't last the whole way through it hit me so hard
1/9/24, 12:50 AM
Really enjoyed this. Would like to have had more details on their sexual activity on the cruise. Hope you write more.